Quiet Poetry Lounge : SHE WAS LIKE RAIN DROPZ

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Upon my face
    droplets lay
    within my heart
    her rain start
    pouring ova me

    cascading
    on a rapid beat
    like indingo drums
    tappin at my love
    dancin as mandingo

    she was like rain
    her love drips
    as my soul sips
    into a massive thurst
    for a down pour

    she was like rain
    spreading her beauty
    in crystal words
    taking me deeper
    under her care

    she was like rain
    i was in love.....
     
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    Like candy rain, showing a rainbow of hope, with happiness awaiting you at the end.............how rosy.........very sensual.........spectacular:kiss1: :blush: :nuts: :star: :star: :star:
     
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    yes spicybrown very sweet
    the drops cascading deep
    my heart now savor every one
    it was love.......thankz
     
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    She was like rain dripping her love upon you, as you relished each and every drop. This was beautiful Rich.
     
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    yes Thank u watz
    every drop i savor
    within my heart to
    behold ...............
     
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    Hi Rich
    Oh I'm just loving this drop
    I can feel the rain..I do enjoy the rain
    the moisture of the mist
    has indeed capture your heart
    dipping into the flood of the flow...:)

    Peace
     
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    ahhhh yes Blue
    when i hear her speak
    it's like rain splashing
    off my window and leaving
    a sweet rapture she like
    rain drops in da morn.......Thankz sis.
     
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    NICE ENDING.......NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
     
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    thankz Lurk man love workz in wayz we never understood
    but only felt the warmth and beauty of it ......lovin and being loved
    is grand .
     
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    AWWW RICH U IN LUV MY BRATHA, DATZ A BLESSIN, NOW I JUS PRAY DAT I CUD LUV SUCH A SOUL, BUT ANYWAYZ DAT WAZ REAL NICE HOW U PUT YO FEELINZ OF LUV IN2 A DESCRIPTION OF RAIN DROPZ, NOW DATZ JUS CREATIVE AND I RESPECT U 4 DAT, BLACKLUV & BP
     
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