Quiet Poetry Lounge : SHE WAS LIKE RAIN DROPZ

[$$RICH$$]

Upon my face
droplets lay
within my heart
her rain start
pouring ova me

cascading
on a rapid beat
like indingo drums
tappin at my love
dancin as mandingo

she was like rain
her love drips
as my soul sips
into a massive thurst
for a down pour

she was like rain
spreading her beauty
in crystal words
taking me deeper
under her care

she was like rain
i was in love.....

 

[spicybrown]

Like candy rain, showing a rainbow of hope, with happiness awaiting you at the end.............how rosy.........very sensual.........spectacular

 

[$$RICH$$]

yes spicybrown very sweet
the drops cascading deep
my heart now savor every one
it was love.......thankz

 

[watzinaname]

She was like rain dripping her love upon you, as you relished each and every drop. This was beautiful Rich.

 

[$$RICH$$]

yes Thank u watz
every drop i savor
within my heart to
behold ...............