Black Poetry : She was just a girl

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She was just a girl talking to every tom, ****, and harry
    No one main girl, no one's pick to marry
    She was just eighteen, but the number of people she fukked made her eighty
    Shorty was naive, shorty was just a baby
    Mixed with mystery, and scandulous behavior, she was just a girl.....not a lady

    She was a girl from the [email protected] projects
    A [email protected] video girl, fukkin every rap star suspect
    Or drug dealer who had money to pursue that
    She was a h0e, shorty was just a cat
    A hot dog bun that connected to every hot dog in her sack
    How low down is that?
    She was just a girl, not a lady in fact

    She was just a girl who proved easy
    A girl on the run, leg always in shape and busy
    Fast cash always on her mind, moaning kept her not lazy
    Long wig on her head str8 as every but her real hair was nappy and fuzzy
    Rocking every name brand from Versace to Bebe
    She was freakier than superhead, they called her DINME
    Stood for dik in me
    I'm tellin ya, she was freaky
    But she was just a girl shorty

    She was just a girl with a story
    She never knew her mama or daddy
    She was just twelve when she was rape by her foster daddy
    After that she got in touch with her body
    It started to feel good to her so she needed it almost daily
    when her foster daddy found out she was giving it up to anybody
    He put her out in a jiffy
    So now she uses it to provide for her and her baby
    It's crazy
    She's took on so much that that she needs to be a lady
    But because of her mind and age, she was just a girl
    A girl in my world and almost everybody


    This is dedicated to Monique. Yo cousin loves you girl. Sorry you got taken away so early by AIDS but I want you to know I'm taking care of your little girl. I never liked kids but for you I would give you the world.

    R.I.P Monique Harrison (1988-2006)
     
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    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow poet...this was deep. Sorry for you loss. Keep on keepin on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Sad reality and deeply felt sorry to hear about your cousin
    may her soul now R.I.P.
     
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    Nice work.

    R.I.P Monique Harrison
     
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    go 'head grl!!!!!!! u killed it.
    :welldone:



    R.I.P. Monique
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know I just met up with some friends from high school. I was not only surprised by how so many people we went to school with passed away, but how many passed away from their battle with AIDS. Thanks for this piece, we need to really send a message to our community. We need to keep the message out there!

    R.I.P. Monique
     
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    Saddening..

    It's horrific how AIDS is claiming out youth faster than their elders. What a sad story, how shameless some folks can be (foster father). My heart sincerely goes out to you and yours, and Heaven help your god-daughter. Reminds me of a friend I had back in 97' who was claimed and maimed by the harsh & cold streets. She, too had a lil girl left mnotherless behind a cruel and senseless killing. Sister Kraze, you are a wonderful young lady and a gracious mother for assuming that role to the sweet lil girl. Much Respect. There is a lesson to be learned fromn this powerful piece. To live shameless and wild in 06' is a guaranteed death sentence, but, of course, some youth usually see such a warning as us oldheads as: "holding them back form something GOOD". May peace be with you and yours:spinstar:

    :hearts4:

    :picture:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well foxy you always have a knack for just putting the story out there, and letting the honesty and your style blend into that poetry. I'm sorry for your loss. You never know whose shoulder you may have tapped with your scribe. Thanks for this.
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks family. It's been hard lately. Schools about to start and now I have to work 40 hours, take care of a child, and go to school. it's crazy but i'll make due because I know my cousin would have done the same for me. I'm going to post a picture of me and my lil' cousin soon. She just graduated from pre-k. LOL. She my little angel and I love her. RIP Monique Harrison
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was deep poet!!!

    Sister, that was deep and im sorry you lost ur friend to AIDS....its ppl like ur self that can help the black community recognized AIDS is no joke and it could happen to anyone!:welldone:
     
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