Quiet Poetry Lounge : She was da INK VOICE of heart

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I've heard a ink voice speak to me
    in the darkness of my misery
    there i stood, a man in weight & chain
    in deep tears and sadly un-notice pain

    Her voice written in black n' blue
    soft tenderly and spoken tru
    every line she pose a love
    that calls my heart from above

    Her essence was a note to read
    black beauty is what she feed
    her liquid warmth i bath indeed
    tasting the depth of her creed

    Every line was releasing my fears
    as i drop these salty deep tears
    arching da sorrow in deep cares
    my love awaits only da heart bares

    She becomes my tapestry of love
    in da hour glass infinite to hug
    words mend like da strongest storm
    da vision in nudity security born

    circles of rapture in glisting sound
    what a beauty my heart has found
    i shouldn't have written , it wasn't da tyme
    to open my body as well my mind

    so i stumble into morrow's light
    from the whispering tales of delight
    in my bedded deep night
    and hope my loveth continue to write.
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You layin it on thick 2-nite $$RICH$$........whew........102

    :jumping:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u spicybrown , i look to read her daily hope one never let me down
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I read so many layers in this piece. The pen certainly is mighty, mindful words can mend a heart, words said in haste, can break one. Well executed piece brotha poet.
     
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    ahhhh! yes watz ya always on key
    I just love to read deep into the ink.
     
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    this is an unique and

    beautifull piece....







    and

    verry deep......






    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    Thank you sista Flower the beauty of her ink voice is a cascading joy
    my heart is flooded in her essence , i hope she write to me again !
     
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    Here i sit in awe
    from the liquid ink
    of her voice pen
    in the memories
    of my mind and how
    she hit the canvass
    droppin love to my soul
    my heart flooded in rapture
    if she only knew and care
    that i feel and lone her
    i love how she dance in
    da depth of my mental
    she my ink voice of love
    her radiant glist is rapid fire
    as i sit in awe...................
     
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