Black Poetry : SHE WAS but lost

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    To hear her
    heart beat was
    like river drums
    clashing when
    we dance touching
    i feel the rapid thump
    of her love like the
    radiant sunshine above
    i taste the emotions
    and hear the sounds
    of her breathing
    the warm air on my
    neck making me
    but i stand strong
    knowing this was wrong
    but the temptation was
    so lustful and caressin
    my body lone
    she was the gallop of love

    my heart open up like
    da red sea as i part way
    she slow dance in
    the tune still ring
    it was the african rain dance
    the water beat of congo drums
    her feet tap like symbles
    her garment was of sheer
    with lace as it blow in the wind
    my eyes went into a vision
    so deep and what we did
    was our secret ,our mystery
    we part lips to taste each other
    tongue twisted to a mellow dew
    of a tropica fruit
    the whispers
    I love u seep and at that point
    i knew my heart was taken
    she was the nubian Queen
    of essence peeking
    her hair was black as coal
    a face of sparkles like
    starz in the night
    her voice was soft and fuzzy
    i was stolen
    but O'my she gone
    somebody tell me have u seen her ?
    is it u
    was it u
    i'm lost waiting to be found just confused :confused:
    but i have one thing str8 I LOVE HER !

    search party intact .....find my Queen :nuts:
    ok i know i need :help:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww richie rich not lost
    i only went to the kitchen :lol:
    man oh man you need :help:

    but fo real
    love when you do yo thang.....
    peace flow on as you do :angel1:
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your imagery was like whoa. beautiful piece. i'll join the search party if you need me
     
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    lol... at angel in the kitchen .....
    well u betta get out here so i can see u
    Thankz sistah for the drop in visit

    phenomenal..........yeap i need ya
    if u see her bring her home please !
    lol
    thankz sistah for the helping hand on dis one and visit
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the gallop of love??

    aw $$RICH$$, this is BEAUTIFUL!! from top to bottom, a thing of beauty. woo!
     
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    thankz gempis if u see her tell her to come here !
    or is it u ......?
     
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    Wow, I was so into this, the drum beats, the images, the passion...hey, hope you find her...perhaps a message in a bottle?
     
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    watz ........ a bottle floating in the river
    i betta go check if u see her call me !
    Thankz sistah
     
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    RICH...man, always a pleasure to read your words. The way you describe it, like I was there too. Tyte, what more can be said. You are the man. :bowdown:
     
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    big ups my brother i must say u bring flava sweet to the
    table ya self so together we just bring it ....

    we gotta hook up and drop one together in a collab soon !
    Thankz my brother
     
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