Black Poetry : She Was Amazing!

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  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Congratulations Babygirl!
    You’re getting married,
    But we both know you aren’t a innocent bystander
    Both know this lovely white dress
    You’re about to try on
    Is all a front, a cover up!
    Cause we did it first
    You remember
    Spring in April
    The month of your birthday, when your Taurus came rushing out into my Spain
    When we did it fully clothed inside roaring crowds, matador danced to bull
    The pant crease of my tux stabbing inside the slit of your jewel
    As we danced like two wild lyrics with
    Bass in our chests, Our slick bodies on tremble
    Lips never touching but dripping like two faucets
    Wanting to fill the sink
    While our eyes re-mixed
    Until the stare was golden
    I wanted you!
    Anxiously awaited in my ears to hear the bridge
    That would connect the hook,
    But you didn’t tell me three
    You bust the free with eight
    Flowed it like, “You- treat- me- like- I- not -even -Alive!”
    And for a moment my heart was a CD,
    I was mad crazy checking for scratches,
    Cause what was supposed to be our song
    Was Skippin
    But I felt the lyrics you were bringing
    Knew that if I had treated you like that, then I too was dead and
    All that **** I did:
    Asking you to the prom in front of the whole church,
    Staying late Saturday to fix the bumper on your car,
    Taking you home from church cause your daddy was
    To busy counting church money, racing you to class just to leave a rose on your desk
    All that **** I did
    Was exactly that, ****
    Ask me if I’m mad
    Ofcourse not
    because I’ve never been ****** so good in my life
    Never sweated through my teeth like that before or come twice at once
    Come through my eyes &
    Come to my senses
    So I will forgive and forget all of this
    And when that day comes
    When I’m raggedy and my grandchildren ask,
    “Who’s that beautiful lady standing in the picture with you?”
    I will tell them, she was Amazing!
    But I forget her name.
     
  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HECK NAW...LOL..U 4GOT HER NAME NOW DATZ FUNNI BUT YO FLO WAS ON THE REAL MY BRATHA
    I WAS FEELIN DIS DROP
    NAW I WAS LUVIN DIS DROP
    SO FLO ON WIT NONSTOP



    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow emissary this was some flo. if i didnt know no better this was anotha usher situation. well love enjoyed this flo on.:smooch:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime when we get mesmerized we forget
    this was mad tyte drop
     
  5. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flo, definitely feeling your style!
     
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