Khasm13 : she was a gypsy woman...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    *lizz fields, "i gotta go"...playing in da club*

    i saw this sexy lady dressed in red
    dancing on the dance floor...boogie nights
    all up in her head...
    the way she moved her hips
    i would have bled...
    just for a taste
    of this cheeky eyed sista
    with da almond complexion face
    she had the look of a hunter
    each time she spun around dat bumper
    then looked over her shoulder...to see if i was watching
    my eyes began to smolder when fixated on dat @ss...
    little did i know....she was already notching me up on her sash
    our eye contact was intense...in fact
    i was hypnotized by sensual eyes...which color was da blackest black
    i moved closer as she spun again on her red stacks
    earlier i saw her diss several macks dressed in tight slacks
    no matta...i still had to try...may i have this dance?...i asked
    no reply...she just moved closer...as the music played.....fast
    her body rubbed against mine as we danced...so quickly i'm at full mast
    so strong was da feeling...i could not mask
    and in this feeling...she seemed to bask
    as she turned around with her back to me...
    so that my mast could feel dat @ss...
    the beat goes on and on and on and...............................on
    i'm oblivious to the changes of the songs...
    my hand glides up and down her side
    my urges grow stronger and stronger...wanting entrance inside...
    bodies sweating...passions wetting...i'm betting
    that this is mines tonite...cause part of me has fallin in love...something feels so right
    when all of a sudden her gurl pops on da scene
    talkin bout...your man just came gurl...and he's lookin kinda mean
    da red dress cutie spun out of my grasp...said i'm sorry...then broke with her team
    i wanted to scream when she left me on da dance floor wanting more like a wet dream...

    she was a gypsy woman....
    .......
    ....i can't believe i fell for a gypsy woman.....
    .......
    ........she was a gypsy woman....
    .......
    ............and she didn't even know that i loved her....
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She got u to????
    Man and I thought I was the only one she worked her MoJo on...LOL

    Tight poem my brother :welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome like whoa guess u now her ace !
    tyte drop brutha fo real !
     
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    mahoganyqueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the ending. She was a gypsy woman and she didn't know I loved her. That sums it all up. Tight flow.
     
  5. msjulia2u

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    I am I am a gypsy woman.. I didn't mean to put the hurt on ya..hehehehehe just kidding... I loved that flow very fun loving ... I got my eyes on you.. keep it coming..Ms J
     
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    What a great storyteller Khasm is... Peace
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thank goodness for that gypsy woman
    look fabulously she made you write
    wonderful Khasm...
    (your first gypsy woman Khasm? huh?...come on now) hee hee!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know how to take a reader into a story, all the sights, and feelings of it...enjoyed the read brotha, do flow on.
     
  9. Khasm13

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    i got this from an ol curtis mayfield song...glad ya'll liked it...

    cp...man...she be buzy as hell holmes...j to da a to da n to da e...thanks dawg

    rich...no ace here man...i'm tring to be da king of spades...lol...thanks man

    mahogany...yeah...that ending is kinda flipped...ish happens though....thanks sis

    msj...yeah u put a lickin on me...but my nickname is timex...:wink:...lol...thanks sis

    1poet...i'm just try'n to keep up with ya'll dude...sho nuff...thanks bruh

    deepy...i know i've slowed down...neva count a ***** out though...poet4life...lol...thanks sis

    watz...i'm glad u could get into it...it makes it all worth wild...thanks sis

    one love
    khasm
     
  10. angelicsage

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    ...this poem left me dazed
    eyes...completely gazed
    in a haze of anticipation

    An ending
    I didn't want to end...

    Poet...u did yo thang
    on this flow...

    Much love to you!
    Sage
     
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