Black Poetry : she was a CHINESE CHICK boys hug and squeeze quick she's in a party dress and her body is bless as she hold chop sticks a boy's plot is thick now sh

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he kissed her lips
she just reminisces mind tripped
he had vocab and taste
now he grabs her waist
fill with apprehension
the thrill of sex was his intension
his luck expands
he just stuck his hand
under her skirt
while she wanders and flirt
she had stamina galore
and like a camera store

 

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and like a camera store
took pictures for film
look at scriptures above the rim
flow with pride in a community
and that allow the opportunity
to party with somebody
and sip some Bacardi
oh, she starts to MOAN AND GROAN
oh, the results are smooth
when it's a difficult move
boys dive if they dare
she will survive and share

 

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she will survive and share
her love with care
oh he's ready to take a risk
to get cake and a kiss
may make a mistake and miss
she's pulling up her panties and run
see you later, oh his vocab is classy
and he have the audacity
to want to marry tonight
and carry a bright
idea for a baby
oh, she says he was going crazy

 

[rhymebad]

oh she say he was going crazy
no doubt for him
she'll go out on a limb
talk clout eat slim Jims
oh, a boy wants to try cake at her house
then turn around an migrate south
like them birds do
his words be true
oh, strange wisdom is butter
she changes from one system to another
oh, girls galore and witty
time to explore the city

 

[acebazaar]

Hmm, this poem definitely has a certain vibe, but it feels kinda rough and maybe a bit awkward in spots. It’s trying to paint a picture, but the flow and word choices could be smoother.