Black Poetry : She Wanted to Out Erotic Erotic With Me (Now She Won't Open Her Eyes)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've seen the sun
    rise up in the east
    and get down in the west
    twice now - it's been
    48 hours since I've seen
    her Sienna eyes...it's
    10:00 pm right now and
    in two hours we will
    be in the exact place,
    exist among the same
    scent, and see the same
    crescent moon that
    illuminated our concupiscent
    incident that has her refusing
    to open her eyes...

    Well this is how it happened...

    She said she wanted to "Out Erotic"
    Erotic, be taken to a point
    where her screams would piggyback
    the protons of an atom, richocet
    off Vega and bless the world
    with a Kaleidoscopic array of
    eternal epiphanies...
    become an existence somewhere
    in the cosmos she thought,
    maybe have a constellation named
    after her

    She wanted me to change my name to
    "Chi" metamorph myself into
    her energy so she could
    feel me from the inside out
    or assume the alias of the "22nd
    letter" cause two plus 2 equals
    fore and she wanted to play

    (So in went slow tape Number 360,
    and we began to revolve around
    the depths of each others desires)

    While waiting for the hiss to end /
    and begin / this dance
    diablo pulled up a seat with a
    glass of tea in hand / and
    a thermostat to balance hell's temp
    to our heat...I told him to
    grab a towel

    She laid there as if she were
    newly born snow / innocent / waiting
    for me to make snow angels upon her

    So I adjusted myself to a position
    within her orgasmic proximity / held
    the fingertips of her hand with my
    tongue...and we danced...
    the increments of her fingers tasted
    of peppermint / soothed me to a
    state of natural instinct cruise
    control / the creases offered me
    ...the panting of her prints / on
    my palette and I swallowed them one by
    1

    My journey traced her marked her
    with points to be revisited/
    and I returned / with a vessel of
    "enhancers" (I wanted her to cum
    a rainbow I could slide down into
    her pot of joy)

    The honey I placed at the base of her
    neck flowed down a channel
    and formed a pool at the small of her back
    / when I dived in she exhaled Lily petals tattooed
    with love verses and we were surrounded
    by encouraging words that urged us
    to give an encore before we ended
    so we could feel the inevitable
    before actualization of a forthcumming
    reality

    My body sweet, sticky from diving
    I rubbed upon her so my soul can
    cling to hers // after I saw them
    holding hands // I began to do
    things that themometers could not
    read...

    My tongue began to connect
    all the points that I left,
    her back arched the souls of her
    feet imprinted the essence of
    frankencense and it walked around us
    in amazement her thighs spread
    and I obliged / I moved in a circular
    motion circumcising all doubts
    that this was real / her
    clitoris told me so / so I pushed
    deep(H)er to get to the origin
    of her sexual etymology
    I found the MANYOUscript after
    I flipped her over and entered
    in the back and smacked / until
    her moans gave me the map

    following the keys to excretory
    fulfillment I held her hips high /
    feet dangling / yet drawing pics
    of what pleases her / I sent
    shockwaves of passion up
    and down her spine / she
    called me king of the zodiac
    cause her womb's been blessed
    by star kisses and caresses

    She closed her eyes and I layed
    her on her side and spooned her
    'til HE found the Ice cream(I scream)
    he'd been looking for...Chocolate
    Mocha Butter Pecan covered in a
    cherryblueblackstrawberry glaze
    and he gained

    ............................weight,

    her legs trembling / cold leaves
    trapped in space blissfully beaten
    by fall rains and she be-came the
    constellation she so desparately
    wanted to be / I called her "Alpha
    and Omega" the beginning and ending
    of her universe and she laid
    there shot into a blak hole of
    visions that creates a body satisfied
    and she closed her eyes............
    to SEE them in their Karma(l) Sutra
    suited splendor.

    Since then I haven't seen her
    Sienna eyes / but her imaginations
    project themselves on the darkness
    letting me know that my efforts
    were not in vain.

    (c) 2001 blakverb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YA NOT IN VAIN
    MAN BLAKVERB SPEACHLESS!
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man O Man!!!!!

    Blak,

    WTF???? Are you for real??? Man your skillz are crazy hot like that!!!! I gotta get your book fella no doubt!!!
    You are one talented brotha!!!!

    Ok man, I'll get off that tangent!!!
    Peace
    GQ
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    This is SPLENDID!
    I love it, I love it, I love it - brotha!!

    This is truly DEPTH....
    Can you do to me all of these things + more and more divided by a continuum of the things I know you aren't even sharing at this point?!

    I just want to know - when will you come over to my place & hook a sista up - On the REAL!!

    Keep flowin' like ya' know somethin'!!
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verb...

    umm... i can't say a word!

    HavingTroubleBreathing...
    Sunshyne~
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks ya'll I try.

    blak
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I believe

    y'all DID achieve! THIS is excellent work...WHAT an adventure for allllll the senses!!!!!

    A
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce, thank ya queen!

    one fam, blak
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot! Hot! Hot!

    *in need of life support myheartstopped*

    Afri
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri-

    thanx sister. I was waiting for your reply.

    one fam, blak
     
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