Black Poetry : She Walked Away

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  1. SoulVaccination

    SoulVaccination Member MEMBER

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    I wrote this poem for her.
    For her & only her.
    To let you know how I feel about her.
    My life is incomplete without her,
    but she walked away.
    When we met, she was cool.
    We quickly became friends.
    I made her laugh and smile,
    but she walked away.
    Someway somehow we ended up as lovers.
    I tried to get clsoe to her, but she pushed me away.
    I was confused why she acted this way,
    but she walked away
    I asked her questions, she never answer back.
    I tried to give her time, she never gave me her mind.
    I wanted her digits, she started her bitchin'
    but this time
    I walked away
     
  2. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this, some girls are like that but it's good that you walked away in the end.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad ya walk away...
    it will be another..
    much love on dis...:angel1:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes you have to know...
    when

    feeling the emotion in this piece!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    everything has its own time...walk on brah...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smooth scribe for her only .....tyte
    welcome within
     
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