Black Poetry : "She Vole Ouy..."

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love you..
    lets see how can I say those words..
    without saying them directly to you..
    love.. i deff. cant say that word,,
    not now not to you.
    so lets rearrange the o-v-e,
    and say vole.... vole I can say to you,.
    cause vole is what i do..
    love is such a crazy word so i choose to vole you!

    You..
    no other but you..
    imma see this one thru..
    Ouy,,, cause thats the secret sound my heart makes..
    when in my vision..
    of sight.
    becomes molested by the art that is you..
    Ouy,, ouy..ouy..
    man.. i got ouy on my mind.

    I theres no other way to refrence me..
    but I think for this purpose imma refrence I.. as she..
    she being my heart..
    who feels you and flutters..
    my mouth opens and.. i stutter..
    because she.. vole.. ouy..

    So heres what Ive been trying to say.,.
    in a very special way..
    without making me too nervous..
    She Vole Ouy!

    with the she being I,
    Vole being .. love.
    Ouy.. being you..

    surely you can understand when you make a woman
    create antother language,
    so that she may tell you..
    how she feels on the real..
    without you making it a big deal..
    that this poem..
    must be true!
    I love you.
    "She Vole Ouy..."
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wove u too ......surely he do too
    this was sweetly pose'd and created
     
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    Ghetto Pig-Latin......LOL

    That was neat how you poised that, PM:shades: Flow on Sista
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo ma that was ill, I love the way you played with the words. Big ups mami
     
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    what a unique type of flava and the words of the louisana chef or cook said and i guarantee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:bullseye:
     
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    Very artisticly done, I like the style ...^5
     
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    thank yall.. this is one of those new love.. heartfelt pieces.. im glad you all felt it.
     
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    Creative flava on this piece
    Much Love to you Sis
    Showing that vole in different ways
     
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