Khasm13 : she used to...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    she used to
    be mine
    all mine
    caramel goddess divine
    always gave me the ill tingling in my spine
    we used to
    spend mad time
    filling up each others soul
    love, tender love out of control
    everything, everyone else was on hold
    while me and her took our stroll
    how can people with 2 working eyes
    be so blind
    to peoples emotions
    it got to the point that i was just coasting
    like a white boy on a skateboard
    wanted to act like i was the lord
    of the manor
    and she didn’t even demand the
    right treatment
    she just said it
    i should have peeped it
    instead i acted sheepish
    then this love she deleted
    and reminded me this is something
    she would not be repeating
    so it would be self-defeating
    to try and rekindle
    now im racked with thoughts of what if
    as I look aimlessly out my window
    on rainy days
    the pain of many pains
    leaves my heart, soul and brain
    with a darkish hue
    because of what I failed to do
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    love it. flow was tight.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now !

    most def tyte flow
    keep da ink spilling to canvass
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwww this was really good :)
     
  5. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so deep with so much feelin, i like it, i like it alot, no i luv it. lol keep flowin poet peace and blessins :)
     
  6. Khasm13

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    purple...thanks, may your moons always shine bright

    rich...as always, thanks for the support brah

    lovely...i gots nutin but the truth, thanks

    serenti...this does have a lots a fellin cause she is truely missed, like how in winter you miss the cool summer breeze...at least here in the chi it's like that, thanks

    this was ventilation week...next week i'll be on sumtin else
    peace
    khasm
     
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    i can relate...hope this is not my fate...stay up and love strong
     
  8. Khasm13

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    cindy...
    her place i been trying to erase
    that face
    that haunts me in my dreams
    her heart
    that was more addictive than dope fiends
    that smile
    that was more innocent then that of a child
    this love was all for naught
    because of the damage that i wrought
    epic battles fought inside a man soul
    from darkness into light
    was the journey that i had with a woman named nicole...

    thanks cindy...

    cypher...
    be wise my son
    and this shall not be thee
    because true love is not guaranteed...

    thanks dude...we need to see more of you around here man
    peace
    khasm
     
  9. Khasm13

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    aw thanks cindy
    im cool, this was eons ago..
    but its a lesson learned
    and that's the key
    wont happen to me again...
    at least not like that...

    quote the raven "never more"
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was soo hot! I am totally feeling you on that, love can be so powerful because it can be so deadly and so inspiring at the same time.
     
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