Black Poetry : She Told Me No

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  1. EbonyKyng

    EbonyKyng Member MEMBER

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    She told me no
    yet she was dripping wet
    between the thighs
    as I dropped another line
    my words
    sending her mind in a swirl
    but she still told me no
    yet her hips twitched
    as she bit her lip
    as I whispered another prose into her ear
    singing softly
    as I laid it down for her
    but she told me no
    yet
    she kept rubbing and massaging her breasts
    as I spoke of us doing that freak thang
    in the night
    how I wanted to
    hit it
    lick it
    flip it
    then split it
    but she told me no
    so then I stopped
    with the harmonic verbiage
    got my coat
    walked to the door
    and then from her lips
    I heard a faint yes
    turning around
    I saw her covered in sweat
    from head to toe
    it was on
    all I had to do was to receive what she was given
    several times I had to beg
    when I knew all alon she wanted it
    yet she refused to be true to her desire
    until she saw that i put out the fire
    then she wanted it
    and so the answer became yes
    But I told her no.
     
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    word up ! ......no is no
    like the flip side of dis here
     
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    a twist of it i may say like your flow...
    nice very nice...lol
     
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    what! you told her no! yeah right! lol i loved this flow though...very nice and i was so into it! much love for this one.
     
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    yah right surrre u did, humph! u know u hit it!:nono: :roll:
     
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    Who could tell you no??

    Poetic genius! This was a tyte flow...loved it! All to true!;)
     
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    I told him no
    as i leaned in feeling
    the thickness of his thing
    and as hot as i was
    he was as long
    and he kept whispering to me
    in his deep voice
    lyrics to some song
    and i still told him no
    and i wanted it so bad
    i knew he knew
    as my desire grew
    breasts and chest glowed
    glistened slick from the drink
    and dancing, mainly him
    and still I said no
    i wanted him to grovel
    to beg to touch my inner mystery
    and even when
    he held me right there
    at the nape of my neck
    and tugged gently on my hair
    i felt myself drip
    and still i said no
    and now alone
    wondering why I didn't
    do the same
    felt he wanted me
    i should have begged
    to taste his sweetness
    when i had him here.
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    um um um.....
    much love,
    -story
     
  9. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aight, Aight...Good piece EbonyKyng....spin off time now...here we go.
    I liked how u gave it back to her.


    Nowwwww
    Could this possibly be
    U hitting the same gurl as me.
    Nawww! That's just not right
    I don't wanna take it there for a fight.

    But wait,
    Let me explain
    What she was doing
    She wanted to call my name.

    Now just think
    Why she didn't give in
    All that was going on
    She was thinking of the sin.

    It was sinful for her
    To be in that position
    Get all roused up
    For blameless inquisition.

    So although
    She did not give in
    I'm just so glad
    U didn't play down to the deadly sin.


    Just having fun playa...just showin' skillz...no disrepect
    Mr. Metree
     
  10. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "my mind is tellin me no...
    but my body...
    my body is tellin me yes..."
    i'm feelin this one... got me over here tryna cool myself down. but i know there have been times when i said no although i wanted to say yes. that's only cause i can imagine how good it could be when the anticipation builds up... anyway, i really do like your style and how you switched it up on the end.
     
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