Black Poetry : She thinks....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Within a dark room she sits
    Wondering of the why and whats…..
    As the thoughts fall tryin to
    read between lines and define
    the room becomes darker
    as the mystery unfolds
    Shallow breathin as the tears seep
    The pain cuts and the hurt yearns…..
    Is there no end or do the pain forever go
    And dig as a blade cutting….
    She seeks within ones self and
    only feel the hurt and find the misery
    of a bliss of memeories
    Tryin to release but the pain
    searches and reaches
    Within a already broken heart
    And a sad soul….
    She tries to grasp the pieces
    as they fall…noticing a lesson learn
    as she continue to grow
    wonderin if this will make her stronger
    or weaker…..within the mirror
    she see the
    past
    present
    and
    further
    wondering whats next….

    blkangel thang....2004
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel u, sis. This is beautiful and on point.
     
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    The pain will end, even though it may seem like it won't. In God there is wisdom and hope for the future.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mzblk...nice piece queen...keep 'em coming...I'm watching...

    blak
     
  5. phenomenalwoman

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    beautiful, this flows together nicely
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this was expressed so well and mentally laid out
    keep the mirror in front of u as it tells the story
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    miss blk...you always come correct with your pieces:) i love em :shades:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis...glad you feel the vibe....thanks my big sis

    watzinaname..thanks for the read

    blakverb....shoot why ya QQ at me ...lol thanks for the love
    glad ya enjoyed

    phenomenalwoman...thanks for the read

    $$RICH$$...indeed your support is great love the wisdom...thanks

    SwtT..baby girl awww thank you so much

    peace and love my fam
    Angel
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok, it's time 4 me 2 creep into your mind! LOL
    Nice drop lady nice indeed.... :read:
     
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    lol @ cp
    sista you have grown since being here i mean that sincerely :)
     
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