Black Poetry : She Sun

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jan 9, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i admire the strength of the sun

    cause i'm not sure if i could stay sane
    if i saw what she sees on a
    daily basis

    i'd hide behind the moon
    eyes closed and
    just eclipse the world
    so chaos and
    disorder would sleep

    forever.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak//// Viirse

    This is tyte!

    N2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow

    verb take it easy bru ya puttin a hurt on ya flow
    just vibing all ova da place .....keep flowin ...!!:D :toast:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verb

    **** this is nice dog!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    This was very good: Keep writing!
     
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    This IS Tyte!!!
    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:

    Still....

    no longer a need to hide
    cause WE bout to rise
    reaching out for the stars
    raising the bar

    the sun and the moon
    its OUR time as WE groom
    nurture and make room
    for a new rising

    our seeds as they bloom

    SOON and Very SOON!!

    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:
    to you My Afreekan King
    throwing my Soul/Spirit in the ring
    from the pits of my BE~ing
    absorbing your sting

    My heart can now sing
    as WE make good circling
    sharing OUR energies
    You watch this "Big Bang"

    ......got ta think of an appropriate ending...

    Thanks BlakVerb!!

    :hearts2:
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the scribe blackverb Happy New Year as well.........
     
  8. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    wow.... i'm at a lost for words!!!!

    deep... love it!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we recognize the true strength of another, we gain power ourselves with that realization. Great piece to bring back true2.