Black Poetry : She Saved Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Jan 2, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lyrics produce hot flashes
    Head aches and whip blashes
    Do some sit ups im thrashin
    Money I keep stashin
    Blow it out your a**
    Shut up relax man
    Kickers im still blastin
    Haters im still trashin
    Fagots im still bashin
    Love well im just askin
    Im chitown I represent
    For the young thugs
    Fatherless chumps and bastards
    Knee hy and anckles socks
    New Era fitted caps
    Philly in my brim and lac
    See how im living mac
    Love is what I earned
    Life is what you yurn
    Willey Lord had to bring me home
    Cause I flipped and they wasnt feeling me
    Eyes bloodshot
    Thats cause they was beating me
    To the left no more
    They would've messed around
    Wound up killing me
    I was stone cold in the streets
    Windy wasnt the saying
    It was the death you could see
    So many pushas
    Dope dealers and hookers
    Po pimps and outside lookers
    I could be your bookie
    Choke rats-Duffy book her
    I aint oldschool tj hooker
    Pam Grier FoxyBrown looker
    Wrestling sammy sooker
    Gurls call me finger lickin
    Im southside pistol whippin
    Nine Milli yes im grippin
    Went from rags to riches
    From moppin floors
    To maids in my kitchen
    Manicures my gurl getting pedicures
    Yes my life is good
    I came from gutter
    Wit a little bit of a studder
    Now that I have cleared my mind
    Saved my brother from this struggle
    I can breath now-Knowing I have Love
    Love for a Queen-Love for my Mother
    She saved me from the clutter in the gutter!!

    Sincerly,
    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
  2. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tantrum nice work......
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You so much Sista
    I appreciate the love and support
    You give all the time
    Stay blessed sweetie
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your are very welcome.
    I know the love and support go along way..
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there are king and queen of rock
    there are king and queen of pop
    there are king and queen of soul
    there are king and queen of r'b
    king and princess of crunk
    and now born


    The King of Shut em Down!!!!!!!!!!1:blowkiss: :hi:
     
  6. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You again Soblessed
    To you sister Nevar
    I extend my blessings as well
    As you have been gift
    From my first day to Destee
    Much Love Sister
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome tyte drop bruh ......wow !
    chi town style
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep on doing what you do, this must sound great read aloud.
     
  9. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You
    For the Love Brother $$RICH$$
    Thank You Sister Watz
    Really Chitown is all I know
    All I live for-Besides my family
    The streets are talking
    Much Love Family
     
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    nice flow homles...
    tyte fast paced piece...

    one love
    khasm
     
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