Black Poetry : SHE SAID: This is a girl’s BLACK HIP HOP the facts drip drop like water off a roof // A

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  1. rhymebad

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    SHE SAID:
    This is a girl’s BLACK HIP HOP the facts drip drop like water off a roof //
    A pack of facts is a bundle of knowledge humble in college that’s the truth //
    Comes to love talk I duck it or get a bucket full poured in my ear drown men //
    My brown skin tells a story it’s the smell of glory with ROYAL CROWN it bend //
    The mind of boys, whole game an illusion came to the conclusion that when //
    You phat and brown boys want you to sat down on their leg aware of my //
    pledge but it’s tuff to say no they wanna huff and puff and play yo I try //
    To escape, got a coffee kettle and wine thoughts softly settle in my mind //
    Wanna scream and express got extreme sex breasts must be clever //
    that mess wit my mind it’s a test of time best I climb up and never //
    Look back this is a shook act go to the book for facts got hot breasts //
    To be sucked but my dress not up plus I’m bless with butt so I rest //
    My case boys wanna finesse my lace my ears starting to clog I hear //
    Barking dogs oh no it’s them boys making noise one boy lost a sincere //
    Girl she took Back her love she prefer thugs best use a group of words //
    never Stoop to nerds my body got brute curves boys minds fly like birds //
    This a wet thrill and like GUY “Let’s Chill” a surprising trend how the rising //
    Wind blow up dust, my do-nut is thrust into the mouth of a boy recognizing //
    This lead to sex a unique attraction express complete action dress sweet //
    No subtraction from my style and boys go wild over that, even a parakeet //
    Would speak crazy if this sweet gravy was thrown in his mouth a chick no //
    Doubt and proud boys pick me out of a crowd because my booty round yo //
    A cutie brown and loco, quick fame with a nickname so fan the quick flames //
    When i strut butt, my lips and eyes hypnotize boys forget where they came //
    From i can name some that tripped out, I’m all chocolate and like a small //
    Rocket I take off because my cake is soft and off the hook so look yall //
    A hike is a long walk and tonight there’s strong talk about a date boys //
    Come with great lines and grape wines have to escape the minds that enjoy //
    Going to bed while my lips are glowing red knowing the threads on my tires //
    Are turning there’s fires burning in the bedroom, dodge the block it requires //
    A camouflage flock of thugs looking for love in the wrong places they roam //
    And chases chicks, on the streets I’m a attraction and boys express strong //
    And complete satisfaction while a HIPHOP beat show action, hard to put //
    Into words it give me voice to live with a choice some boy will kiss my foot //
    Have to take a brisk look and deal my my chance for a real romance a cook //
    Book is available, I best maintain if a boy sends me a letter by express train //
    My sex breast remain unsucked, fun to duck boys that make noise, brain //
    At a standstill I plan to chill after I escape because a boy will try for cake //
    My thing so wet will go get the kotex, boys kiss my lips and play so great //
    Gonna slip away this trash is exciting like a flash of lightening leave lines //
    Across the sky got soft pie and like DIANA ROSS try be SUPREMES at times //
    Want me at your hiding place so you can be sliding in my lace sip wines //
    This black HIP HOP culture prove the structure is smooth like the surface //
    Of building, I’m the hot type and not ripe like green peaches have a purpose //
    On extreme beaches LOOK I REMEMBER I was sitting in this boy’s lap my //
    Ears was gitting zap by that love crap my panties in a drier habitat i try //
    Escape but too late he wanted true cake for goodness sake really got pie //
    a phenomenon and ballistic as sex is jest common characteristics but hey //
    My thing is hot he said “ your brown thighs and round eyes are on display //
    Girl a hot kiss is not to be missed so stop and reminisce, you must be //
    Tired and your pie crust is required to set things straight stuff I see //
    Be desired like bling and cake, my corrupt fate is up-to-date the bed //
    Await your cake so enjoy the trend let me be your boyfriend lips red //
    Hype and aware that a nightmare is a bad dream girl you got mad cream //
    Best leave before this boy folds out a cart for sleeping jest keeping //
    It real, sex can reach through text or speech I’m jest a creeping //
    Complex peach here in VIRGINIA BEACH oh phooey this here can //
    Be gluey if he sticks a kiss on my lips, so with luck I duck and stand //
    Clear need a fan oh dear my body hot a commodity to shop for stopped //
    At a bar wearing a tight skirt boy wanna do some night work and shop //
    While my hips hop and my lips be hot, but I jest play it off and may cough //
    If allergies crowd my nose proud to close the door wanna rose galore false //
    Flowers don’t cut it got sex powers to strut butt a bit and boys eat that up //
    Beep beep in a truck need the keys to the jeep put the top up need a cup //
    Of coco boys see my butt go loco some a cut above bozo the clown and this //
    Not funny I’m jest a hot honey, love has many sprouts, plenty about a kiss //
    Prefer texting, boy’s words be perplexing be struggling with aggression boys //
    Ask puzzling question hugging to profession as beauty queen really enjoys //
    My duty is keen boys use quicker verbs and particular words to try persuade
    My parade and get laid right here in VIRGINIA BEACH so in an ironic way //
    The EBONICS stay grooving with luck and moving on up like GEORGE and //
    WEEZY
     
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    rhymebad ... :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    OH MY GOSH - This is GREAT!!! ... :toast:

    At first i was like ... is this about me ?? ... :mirror: ... did he say ... SHE SAID ... or ... DESTEE SAID ... ?? ... and then i kept reading and was like ... oh gosh noooo ... this can't be about me ... :eeek: ... is this kinda talk even allowed at destee ... OMG! HOT! ... :blob fire:

    Okay ... then i calmed down, kept reading ... 'cause it is hot ... just like this line says :

    sex can reach through text or speech I’m jest a creeping

    So beautifully written ... winding and twisting and turning and rhything ... :)

    It reminded me of the old EXTREME poetry from Bishop, Watcher and $$RICH$$ ... remember that?

    This almost makes their EXTREME poetry look like sunday school lessons ... :look:

    I especially loved the ending too ... so good and true ...

    boy’s words be perplexing be struggling with aggression boys //
    Ask puzzling question hugging to profession as beauty queen really enjoys //
    My duty is keen boys use quicker verbs and particular words to try persuade
    My parade and get laid right here in VIRGINIA BEACH so in an ironic way //
    The EBONICS stay grooving with luck and moving on up like GEORGE and //
    WEEZY


    It's really great through and through!

    Thank You! ... :flowers:

    Love You!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. rhymebad

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    wow destee thanks it's just there girl that's how I do
     
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