Black Poetry : She said she couldn't be broken

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she said she couldn't be broken
    she even tried herself, buying
    all the latest things that vibrated,
    rattled, sighed, and tickled her.
    she said she bought the most expensive one,
    the longest one, the softest one, the thickest
    one and the one with the little knob at the
    base for her clytoris

    she amused me with her banter about
    how no man has yet succeeded in making her
    scream their name or arch her back or
    just plain ole please her...said she was tickled at
    all the efforts made...the grunting the sweat the...
    "Baby, whose *** is this" quotes and played sex
    cliche's

    she was so "spirited" so proud that no man or toy
    has made her 'gasms go O...Ohhh..Ohhhh...Oh **** ****...
    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh...she was so braggadocious about
    this that I wondered if she ever knew what
    pleasure was...

    when I was done (and I say I because if I say we it
    would appear that she was in on this pleasure thing
    and she was determined not to let me win...actually let
    her win when she let me in) when I was done

    when she opened her eyes / beyond the tears
    she said she knows her name from her former life
    and has met her reincarnated self
    she played patty cakes with the hands
    of snow that just hung above her head refusing to
    fall and she saw the birth of the sun when it was
    just a star and the world was cold...
    she said her body still shakes and that she has drawn
    a picture of her Orgasm and framed it to hang
    above her bed so she could come anytime

    and that I could come over anytime...and

    I am so amused at how her nipples get hard
    when I speak to her and how her mouth waters when I
    whisper to her

    and...she just didn't realize who I was or why I was
    just that I was and because of this she has signed my name
    to the bottom of her painting

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and she was broken...

    **** Blak u hit up on dis piece here Brutha!!
    Tyte flo!:)
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's right, handle yo bizness!!!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  4. misty

    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that how i like it
    if you see a tear u done
    done something
    :hot:

    MisTy
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww shucky-darn darn!! I'm lovin' this inside & out!!

    (Holla @ me....)

    N2 :D
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just wondering

    what sista wouldn't want to get broke off..... hmmmmmmm
    I'm with all before me....han'l it, brotha!

    a
     
  7. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my ****! Do your thang, playa! :)
     
  8. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hell Ya, now thats what I'm talkin bout, know how to make a sistah come hard boy!!!!! I need me summa you. Tight scibin' man
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    You know you do top notch!!! this was none the less...

    Reas
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dawg

    TRUE PLAYA STATUS

    dun
    no doubts

    mad flava here

    lovedided it man

    dssny
     
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