Black Poetry : she said "***** me"

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jul 18, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blunt she was

    "***** me"

    she said

    (apple adam's my on choked near ****)

    had me thinking things backwards
    then my thoughts straightened out
    permed to the root permanently
    had to swallow this invite before it
    became temporary

    and i obliged...

    she felt
    good
    like
    friday at 5:00 and it's quitting time

    warm
    like
    laying on the equator

    slow
    like
    hesistant rainfall on
    hot bodies

    she rose and descended
    as if she was sneaking up on me
    in the dark

    then i flipped the script
    and her over...

    her whispers adorned me
    the night's eye gleamed glances off her
    words and translated them into
    another celestial blessing

    and i moved s
    l
    ..................o
    ....w
    ...............L
    Y

    syncopated myself with
    every 5th second and danced
    my hands along the creases
    of her *** so i could accept
    her exhalations on my
    eardrums...

    ...translation: beat me gently with your
    hips upon my hips part my lips 'til
    rivers run and your breaths swim upon my
    self

    she was wonderful
    she said "***** me"
    so bluntly...that whenever
    she speaks my mental state
    accepts her vision
    in it's natural form.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sgp.

    mmm mmm mmm...

    & i do believe that's all i can say...
    other than... this was simp-ly delicious! :D

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my word ....... :) What's really been goin' on heah?! :lol:

    This is soooooo "Blakverb--ish", that I can't stand up straight!!

    This is off da chain Sean!!

    N2
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen N2 and GA,

    ya'llknow your words are appreciated
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now ya gonna have ladies falling down round here!
    tyght flow
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now that's like right!!!
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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    all i have to say is..."***** Me"
    (no for real....lol)

    Brother this is a wonderful peice....
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blak........Man this was awesome...hey she got a sista?????
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    too tyte! :toast:
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam
     
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