Black Poetry : She Reads Like A Novel

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Jul 23, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I walked into the dimly lit room
    The ambiance was nicely drawn
    Much like a poet about to vibe

    She noticed me without delay
    Eyes met mine with a shy grin

    **** she's kinda right I thought

    Body was bangin' like that
    Hope she has the intellect to
    complement such a perfected
    gift from heaven above

    She was smooth without a doubt
    I was up to a little reciprocity
    in matching her alluring sophistication
    with my own gentleman's quality

    Eyes reveal an inner meaning

    She wanted me to read her
    like a good romance novel

    So I did…
    Wanting never to put this
    steamy book (her) down

    As I flipped through her
    pages, each chapter got
    hotter and had me wet
    with sweat

    The foreword told of her
    reason for being the woman
    whom she was

    Good upbringing, better
    character, and greater morals

    Chapter 1 highlighted her
    intellect - a plethora of
    knowledge from a black
    woman's perspective

    Inner beauty and a loving
    heart danced along each
    paragraph of Chapter 2
    {You know the outer beauty
    was thorough as well (smile)}

    Ensuing chapters made this
    woman a best seller!

    They told of her sensuality and
    how she would love a true
    brotha…

    With mind, soul, body, and
    heart - she broke it down
    like this:

    The mind makes love

    The soul nurtures the
    body which is a temple

    And the heart connects
    all four associations
    which make her who she
    is…

    A real black woman
    who is the paradigm
    of what a real sista
    is all about

    Had me wondering as I
    fundamentally
    read her…

    Could I be that brotha
    in the front line for an
    autographed copy?
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems so!!!!

    this was smooth!! :cool:
     
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    a novel.....?

    ooh I beg to differ my eloquent brotha..this is more like volume 1 of a 4-volume autobiographical masterwork in progress for the purpose of treating each essential ingredient of mind, soul, body and heart...as only a Black woman can scribe it!

    I'm reading this like a lesson-help for my spirit!

    thank you

    a
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee-Que...


    awww ****!

    just when i thought i could get off da oxygen
    for good... you drop some **** like this!!! :wink:

    i'm feelin' your flow... (as always)

    OneLuv.
    BlakGurl. :)
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    fella

    you lying the game work down lovely

    feeling all cylinders

    Mac-ing


    >DSSNY<
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smooth as silk!!!

    Thanks for the read ya'll!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAN

    YA PEN IS FULL AND READY
    U SLAP A TYGHT PIECE HERE ON ME...
    SMOOTHLY AND WIT CURVES......VERY NICELY WRITTEN:D :toast:
     
  8. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sure

    you could be.... Nice scribe...I like this...
     
  9. Hunter

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    Ain't nuthin' betta than reading a good book...and you dear poet read like a mo'fo' page turner!!

    **** those chapters were tooooo tight!!

    *novel-studies*
     
  10. MapleXtract

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    Well...

    ..sir (my favoritest flirt),
    based on your interpretation of said novel,
    I'm just guessing you've found yourself
    a real page-turner;
    and I just couldn't see why
    t(s)he author wouldn't grant you
    such a simple request.
    Can you tell I felt this one???...:D :D :D
     
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