Black Poetry : She(pt.2)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Sep 29, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt dismantled around her,
    maybe it was her talk or the way she walked on waters
    (Her nickname was Jesus)

    It seemed that she was suducing the lines
    within my heart to expand, and grow past
    dangerous lines...
    then i knew,

    It wasn't suppose to go that far
    just scratches on my back
    and moans in my throat,
    heads between my legs,
    and nipples harder than
    Hitler's commands,

    but it went farther than
    the occasional shower laison,
    private nights eating chocolates
    sipping Zinfindal and licking pain from the curves
    off of each others bodys

    but she had me stuck...

    To Be Continued
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice drop, definit, feeling this
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL nice drop but do I have to :jam: my computer until u feed us more :?:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this is the poet..."The Story"...that I know
    the poet...I was just talking to a friend about today
    and what an incredible writer you are...

    This piece was awesome...
     
  5. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Did I miss pt.1 cause that was :hot:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt all dis here wow! can i get a 3 on dis flow
     
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    She sounds seems to have an aura too bright to view with the naked eye....Please continue poet, loving the richness of your flow.