Quiet Poetry Lounge : She preferes the old fashion way........like those days

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was brave.....
    because i always held the milestones friendly on a armlength distance...
    no vulva touch or pooky rub....
    when i opend myself up for the beautifull soul passengers...

    the person with the solitary musing..
    the traveler...
    the taker....
    the me not knowing familyman..
    the lonely smooth operator.....
    the brother looking for a mother,sisterfriend ,.....

    or just lover....

    the brother looking for just truth and light.....

    its all good....
    you can not turn it back..
    i,m gonna be alright....

    Often i was seen as the girl in her novelty ...
    but rarely as the woman of 31 whom desires for her nimrod or gentleman...
    and her role in this excistance...

    "its going to be ok with her ...'she is pretty' and young (pointing at my looks) ...
    from where that nostalgia..they wonder...""
    and i go thinking now where is that comming from ...?
    now its about the looks again huh...
    On the melody of the sheperds pipe...
    she says....:
    What do you think of the drawing room..The salon..
    the dream of my lovers Salvo .My heart is not a raisin..?
    The beautifull residence of thee or entry of a we..
    In my rut of my feminine excistance i am

    o topmost brandaris..(lighthouse)that does not wants to be shamefaced...
    without her guardsman but also does not want to reseave him as an ambition...or an ammunitie ...

    but a silent disire..
    dead tired ar the bells that ring in her ears..
    of sweet words and promises..Quotes..."i am send by god " ""i love you "

    but no one around..
    to touch..
    the painter falls in love with the idea...
    but not taking the time to paint her..
    I am not mad neitgther sad...
    just on my self missing ..my other half..
    I,m not mad at the bolt of lightnings of the o so ...
    oso so so so ..beautifull brothers that struck in my chest..
    they can not help it....
    God has blinded them ...
    sealed me for you...
    cause non of them have truly seen me..
    and so i wait for those eyes....
    in wich i see ...
    the love...
    us..
    eternity....

    No they can not help it ..
    the catpain of this ship has not arrived..
    to rock it...
    mmm..
    They were beautifull vague miracles ...
    of dive birds ...who dived...
    when they saw the totaly vieuw...

    My eyewindscreenwipers are rusty its enough..
    now its my season to do my thing...
    yes i,m gonna sing..
    you never know when you die..
    so i wanna live...
    Domestic/homelike on the island or not...
    but i am going to trade the dishcloth for the crashhelmet and the strong spinal colum..
    I,m not going to invite myself anymore..
    I,m the woman ..
    he is the man...
    I,m just going to be brave and do what i need to do..
    take care of myself...
    and if a man aproaches me realy likes me..
    invites me...
    have a drink with me..
    goes out with me..
    than we will see....
    if i will come out of my shelf...
    cause i ,ve been there reaching out...
    i tried it the other way...
    than the old fashion way...
    and it didnt work out well....
    I can not always be a mother trying to wake up their..spinning weels..
    and solving their problems....
    can i lean on tosome big brother shoulders to ..
    You dont have to be the last samurai,or a gladiator...
    jezus is my first husband and protector you know......

    So she will wait...like some of our grandma,s and grandpa,s did in those days
    and i will stand there now and than....
    in front of the like a gracefulness vase waiting for the bundle of flowers softly ..
    or strongly..
    slide in to me...


    like a brave Soldier that strikes ,drops,(falls lol oeps),down....


    with his parachute ....


    of love.......


    and i will bath you...
    in my waters of joy....


    we will walk trough the heavenly gardens......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling you sis on this one ......speak on !
     
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    i like this sis do flo on.:welldone:
     
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    most welcome .................
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    a beautiful write..aurora....very visual, very florid....I like the almost "classical" lean you put in this piece...I understood the alliteration you used here.....
    a very classy write....
     
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    thank you:heart:...





    yep its gonna be like that...









    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    LOL...thanks aurora for sending that....I have totally forgotton about Destee (head bowed)

    Its also good to read this work again....you just had it all when you wrote it...its so unified....

    its just **** good to see you around. i seen RICH is still here. Wow. I havent posted anything new since 2004?
    I gotta get a membership, so I can find your new work....send me some titles, dearest.
     
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