Black Poetry : she pleasured me

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She Pleasured Me

    Her pleasure was akin to WORSHIP
    As, inch-by-inch, she kissed me
    From head to toe
    …Everywhere she could go
    She loved me

    Butterfly kisses
    And gentle caresses
    Had me confessing my undying love
    But I’m guessing
    She had me caught up
    In every moment she could think of

    Her love was so (deep…and)
    Detailed
    It quelled my desire for
    Reciprocity
    Had to MoMeNtArIlY
    Invalidate my lOvEr status
    Took a ten-minute hiatus
    As she devoured me

    So thorough was she
    In her pleasure of me
    I could not move
    No…not weak-kneed
    Weak boned
    Her touch had sapped
    The very “strong” of me

    Her generosity for loving
    Had me greedily
    Possessive
    In my thoughts of her

    ~ I didn’t even care when she wanted hers

    Then she had the nerve to tell me
    “We’re through”
    Right after I made that move to
    “Fool’s Island”

    ****…I didn’t understand

    Then…she dropped demands
    And ultimatums
    ‘bout my dating other women
    And “trimming” away from home
    Told me I was on my own
    …If ever Mr. Johnson’s candy coating
    Was hard-baked in some other woman’s oven
    While noting some BS her gurls had told her
    Said I was dead if I tried to act like a soldier
    Coming to attention when I wasn’t supposed to
    Said, “Don’t you know…I own you?”​
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Dang! She just had to go and mess up a good thang! lol


    It was all good til she started kickin' that "OWNing" stuff!

    I was even givin' o' girl some props and cheers and stuff. She wuz handlin' her bizness! lol

    But, that "Fatal Attraction" kinda love, gotta go!


    This was hot with a powerful right hook at the end, Baller!
     
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    decipherx1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright now! do your thing bro!
     
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    flow on brother!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man she had to do it didn't she
    Da pleasure in reading this was awesome
     
  6. Lady Grace

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    Looooove the poem
     
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    Hot **** she did that thing on purpose! Although, my question, if it is so good with her, or any other woman, why can't a baller turn in his player's card? The owning ****, I get that's a little crazy. But y can't she have all of you? Your writing is so tyte.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know...

    You are so good at what you do and we are loving it too!:)

    Great flow Mr Man!


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:heart:
     
  9. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    first...

    Lady Grace...Welcome to the playground.:)

    Randee...a playa can turn in his playa card for any reason he so chooses. LOVE is a wonderful reason to walk away from the game. but good sex isn't love...and a wild woman isn't worth it. (sorry) KNOW THY MATE.

    now, fellas, help me out. tell me if you've ever been with a woman who felt that a man would follow her through the fires of hell...just to get to that split between her legs...one who felt that a man could be led to do anything for sex. you know the one...who thinks that she can control you with sex. don't tell me you've never experienced this.

    ladies...some of you go off the deep end, in trying to control men with that slice. understand that it doesn't work like that. sure, you get some YOUNG men who get caught up for a minute...but that only lasts for so long.:)

    GLAD YOU LIKED IT.

    the river floweth.