Black Poetry : She Named Her Baby destee

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    She Named Her Baby destee


    Notes of prince and jill scott perfumed the air
    Giving the night a sensual staccato vibe.
    Her mind gently caressed a thought,...u know...im a
    name that baby destee

    her gaze locked with computer sceens forming a forum
    like erotic palpitations do seized her pulse.
    her drive steamy like $$RICH$$, angelicsage,and Khasm13 on haiku

    Sweet seductive thoughts flowed thru her mind
    and she said...
    name that baby destee

    an eruption of soliloquie.
    Poetically praising her perfect participles of thought.
    she made a place
    where poets long to be deep inside a verse,
    Lyrically licking minds,
    Massaging metaphors,

    Tasting the nectar of our sonnets,
    poets lips wet with the dew from a soft stanza,
    Bringing us all closer to unbridled recital
    then she said
    "yep..name that baby destee"

    delicious dissonance into your soul.
    Deliberatley detonating divine dysphemism from her heart,
    Injecting incredible imporvisations into your intellect.
    Leaving you to slipping between dimensions
    groping, gripping, gyrating, grabbing, guiding,
    rotating rhapsody, reverse rodeo riding all our dictations

    and then .....she said..."im a name that baby destee"

    Sweeping us away to a place of undying pleasure.
    where The warmth of kindness still dwells
    And now I am overtaken by thoughts of flowing inside of me.
    Lingering dreams where passion still surrounds my every being.
    It is poetitc sweetness like watzinaname,deepy and mzblkangel that I taste.

    all of that is in the eye of the beholder,
    she beheld made a forum ....
    and then .....she said..."im a name that baby destee"

    destee i love your baby too
    we all glad u made it ....hookup
    :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks:
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop, keep em come,
     
  3. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hookup...this is so fly
    i'm feelin' this
     
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    nice vibing and creativity poet...flow it nice drop indeed
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this one here is out of sight my brutha wow!!!!!!!!
    u sho nuff hooked it up wit great vision & creative mind set
    ur awesome poet !
     
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    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem was awesome.
     
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    Whew, this wore me out, I'm just wondering how you yourself feel after putting together something like this. Destee must be speechless, I know I would be. Thanks for this poet.
     
  8. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    thank u all :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2:
     
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    And what a beautiful baby...

    Very nice piece, here.
     
  10. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    thanks all
     
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