Black Poetry : She Must

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jun 28, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She must desire me
    Before I can make love to her
    First we talk about the desires
    Anticipation and blood heat begins to rise

    Understanding is what is arrived
    Lips smacking as we pull apart to speak
    Trembling hands.. feeling it to the feet

    Drunk like feeling. This is happening now
    Don’t try to stop it, it takes on its own life somehow.

    Looking her over, she says
    It’s all for the right man

    I am here at this moment with
    Faith in my hands.

    Gotta pace this
    Passion race this

    She glowing
    Me growing
    Squeezing her tight
    Against my chest
    Passion might
    Ready to take my time she is right

    Cancel everything else I had in mind tonight
    Trying not to think to far ahead
    Sex is an experience happening body and head

    In the moment if I feel like
    I just can’t hold back
    Then I am going for broke and tell her that​
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Hodee! WHOODIE-HOO!

    Man, this'll gitcha STALKED for real! :lol: j/k

    But, this whole scene was so VIVID, so VIRTUAL!

    Whew! Been there. Done THAT!
    *Ooops! Did I say that out loud?!* :lol:

    You did the dang thang! :bowdown:


    LOVED IT!

    SAW IT!

    FELT IT!
     
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    Very nice Hodee, as always....your words are smooth like silk.


    epiphany :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    to desire is to love at first hand ....man this was all dat and some
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this was passion. Wonderful flow brother Hodee.
     
  6. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's real talk, great drop . . . good to read you again

    Lyr1c
     
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