Black Poetry : she mo' better now

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Jul 19, 2002.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    on the lighter side of darkness
    she resides within
    strength and beauty outweighing the layers of cracked veneer
    which reflect her hidden surface

    she mo betta now

    time heals all wounds
    even deep and jagged scars that slither across her soul
    like the spiderweb shape of broken auto glass

    she mo betta now

    she pops a pill
    she lies in the sun
    she accpets herself the way that she is
    and like a glimmer of hope
    her soul brightens like a flame
    a beacon of what once was and yet still is

    she mo betta now

    she realizes that she only owes it to herself to be happy
    no one can do that for her
    and like a phoenix rising
    she is once again the ruler of her own destiny
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a masterpiece ma! I'm mo betta now too...

    Lovin it
    Reas
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you should see me clapping, this is so well written and true. I really loved this piece and to quote Reason (Masterpiece)
     
  4. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your feedback...every day I am striving to get better.
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    sometimes we go through stuff
    and it makes up stronger
    and usually we come out on top
    and she's mo' better now
    is evidence of that

    nice strength gained thru suffering here

    DSS
     
  6. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Still I'm getting mo betta...thanks
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sort of inspiration that makes you feel you're being tapped on the shoulder. Hoping to be "mo' better" like this. Diggin this vibe.
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice replay, watz.

    This is a nice awakening piece.

    Get mo' better.

    Love self.

    Peace.
     
  9. SoothinDivinity

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    I'm Lovin It!

    Your flow was so deep and inspires me to be mo betta. Imma work on that.
     
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    Mo better for real
    Very deep scribe poet
    Much Love on this drop
     
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