Black Poetry : She Mine..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Dec 2, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Breathing softly in my ear
    I feel the words you say
    I understand your love for me
    In every little way
    Your fingers cool upon my skin
    Exploring every part
    Each bubble of desire within
    Exploding in my heart
    You give me all a woman can
    Upon your love I feed
    You’re everything I ever want
    Fulfilling every need
    You move me deep within my soul
    I stifle joyful tears
    You clean away my darker thoughts
    And wash away my fears
    You banish nightmares from my mind
    My dreams now filled with you
    Together we become as one
    A love forever true
    I try to think of words to say
    Explain the way I feel
    But you just take my breath away
    I can’t believe you’re real
    And if I ever lost your love
    Or you just walked away
    I would have no reason to go on
    I would die that very day

    Caramelpython 2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i think ya said it..
    the emotions of this pieces
    was invitin
    mind wondering this was very
    well posed crafted how
    every you like to say
    nice flow poet of the week...
    flow on...this one was love....:angel1:
    Angel
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that's love.

    Very nice.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sir indeed she yours
    this was beautiful and true love
     
  5. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAY-um, where you been all my life, and with a name like Caramelpython . . .imagination running wild.
     
  6. Bluewater

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    you do know how to woe..mmm...wonderful yes this is
    Peace
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes I second PositiveMindSet...that is truly love...beautiful.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The love in this piece is clearly felt. Flow on poet of the week.
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thank you poet of the week...for your flow...
    lovely it was...taking me back to a sweeter time..
    rich in images and rhyme..

    i had not read any of your works before...what a nice way to be introduced to you...
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deepy ......... I am pleased that you have taken time to read my work I hope you take time to read more in time.

    watzinaname......... TY poet I shall hold on.

    triniti424................ You are a poet I love to read as well.

    Bluewater............. I have a few skills under my belt....LOL TY for the love.

    Randee................. LOL, just remember the name, cause U might B screaming it later..LMAO, Just playing.. Thanks 4 the love.

    $$RICH$$ .............. Thaks rich they say love is as real as you can make it.

    PositiveMindset......... Thaks for the love, Im feelng your work as well.

    mzblkangel............. TY I shall try to uphold this honor.
     
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