Black Poetry : She Made the 1st Move

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mixed
    emotions
    hope's
    floating
    staring
    waiting
    for an
    invitation
    eye's shining
    lips gleaming
    i'm finding
    that i must be dreaming
    skin so soft
    hair so exotic
    dancing to this music
    ooooh so erotic
    gotta feel
    gotta taste
    1st impression
    nothing wrong, no mistakes
    maybe its me
    naw, its gotta be u
    never witnessed
    anyone hotta than u
    air keeps passin
    while the time is tickin
    wanna make a move
    but her presence keeps me restricted
    can smell ur sweetness
    from way over there
    girl, what is that?
    peaches, plums, no that gotta be pears
    she keeps on glancin
    smiling in my direction
    she keeps on dancin
    with extra affection
    body made of angles
    shapes and degrees
    i wanna know the circumfrance
    but ur mathematics got me on freeze
    tongue tied
    mentally frustrated
    cuz Pocahontas is right in front of me
    and time is a wasted
    but in one minute
    and in one blink
    she did the impossible
    sumthin i didnt think-
    she'd do
    she steps to me
    whispers in my ear
    "i seen u watching me
    I winked at u, hopin u'd come here"
    I smiled and said
    "I was just watching you twurk"
    But really...
    I smiled cuz I didnt have to do any work
    she made the 1st move...
     
  2. Baby Bird

    Baby Bird Member MEMBER

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    Gurl, do it again.

    Wait...that's what the scroll bar is for.
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL... I'll take that as a compliment...LOL
     
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    mmmm
    this is so nice
    i can see
    the smile
    very nice
    loving this
    Peace
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Blue, ur always showin madd love, much respect to ya Sistah.
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem was real tyte.... keep them coming...... remember... m/f enterprises......
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My goodness, my goodness, this is tighter than a cheapskate. Such flow, mmm mmm mmm.
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL thanks yall...
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    real nice
    like it alot
     
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    and how hot is this..............

    completely off the charts........

    such Confidence,

    you won the mating dance....you knew she was "all" yours after that, lol

    this was smooth...
     
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