Black Poetry : She Loves Me

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could write about her all day...
    i love this woman...
    her chiseled face her warm embrace
    i love this woman....

    she tests my intellect,
    i let her pick apart my brain...
    we get closer every day,
    she drives me insane..

    but i love it..
    i slow dance with this woman
    walk out in public
    hold hands with this woman
    oh im gonna take a chance with this woman
    i hope it all lasts with this woman
    cause ill do what she wants me to do

    ill aim for her
    got a name plate on a chain for her
    i made it known im gonna change for her
    no more datin around,cause shes the one i found
    whos real with me
    somebody i know who'll
    build with me
    yea and when i act up
    she'll deal with me
    late night sexin
    she feels with me

    her pain is mine,
    and my love is hers

    i'll leave the hood for her
    go straight to being good for her
    oh im gonna love like no other for her
    cause thats my woman
    thats my love
    theres no one above

    i been thru it all
    met em all before
    ones that'll smile in ya face
    tell you ur what they're lookin for
    but when times get hard,
    they get up and leave you fast
    and in the end,when it didnt last
    i told myself she was just a peice of a.ss...
    what does it mean?
    its not what it seems
    am i the only one who bleeds from my heart?

    noooo......

    i knew it from the start,she

    will aim for me
    got a name plate on a chain for me
    oh she made it known shes gonna change for me
    no more datin around,cause im the one shes found
    whos real with her
    somebody she knows who'll
    build with her
    yea and when some1 acts up
    i'll kill for her
    late night sexin
    she knows im the best and...

    she loves me.....




    yea im still workin on it...lol



     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Awesome piece i was feeling this joint...........
     
  3. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is in the air:blush:...Cherish her:spinstar:...Outstanding

    :love:

    :picture:
     
  4. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't change a word!!!!
    This is a totally beautiful expression of
    luv for your woman. I hope you read this
    to her. Everyone should be so lucky
    to luv like this. Hella scribe brotha Lurk.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Doesn't seem like you need to work on it any more, this already spells love and devotion. Much enjoyed.
     
  6. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice

    This was a very sweet poem Lurk. Glad to see u comin back.:) I should be back real soon, just been busy with school and work. Keep up the good work and much love to ya.

    AM:)
     
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    i read this like three times
    and this was real serious bruh
    wonderful way to express that love
    8/10
    uno
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i know

    i taught you better

    i taught you how not to be whup but to do the whuppin'

    get yo' asz back to boot camp now

    lol
     
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