Black Poetry : She Loves Me/Not

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Nov 4, 2002.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If your happiness requires
    The abandonment of every thing that makes me smile
    Is that really love
    Did you ever love me
    Or just the idea of who you wanted me To be
    And if I become your Frankenstein
    Can I still love
    Me
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shazzy.


    i'ont know what's real-ly goin' on... but!
    don't you change a thang... she'll just
    have to adjust.... 'cause you know you
    gotta be true to self... First!! :) you always
    tryin' to start ****!! :lol:

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i used to wonder... why don't you just leave?
    but i understand the staying.
    keep flowing it out of you. :spinstar:
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    elayne
    thanks for the love

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    I wonder 2
    wish I had the answers
    perhaps it is a belief in the possibility of the unknown and fears from the past.
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    questions. questions. does anybody have the answers poet! nice piece.
     
  6. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang! u love her that much to be considering changing ur self ?
    dont do it , its not worth it.
    keep flowing!:)
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz

    I couldn't have put it betta... im here right now! thanks for sharing this...

    Reas
     
  8. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no answers my brother just more questions and proximities to understanding.

    DaflavaFul
    Been there done that and it ain’t worth it.

    Reason
    Glad to see we still see eye to eye.
    Thanks for reading me
     
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