Black Poetry : She knows what she's doing

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she says she wants it, but she's holding back
    its less attractive when she starts pulling that
    she should know by now my mouth isnt flowing rap
    i see the god in her and i want to get to know more of that

    when we're kissing
    touching, mixing
    she stops and makes a decision
    on not doin what we need to finish
    she talks and i listen
    but my hormones are jumpin and twistin

    but when we're on the phone...
    she makes a list of her sexual desires and tellin me she's alone
    making me hot like fire until i burn right down to my bone
    then once it gets quiet, she likes to make little moans
    and she can tell i cant take it by the crack of my tone

    she giggles
    and it annoys me alittle
    she's playin me like a fiddle
    this is love, not a riddle

    she kills me cuz she knows she's the sh*t
    she gives me that look with the smack of her lips
    lips red like she gave a lolly pop a lick
    i wanna just dive in for a kiss, but its too much of a risk

    i dont know her intention
    maybe this is a sign of prevention
    but did i even mention
    that this girl is god's top of the line invention?
    she's so fly, she got the bird's attention
    she got me on lockdown, like i got the life sentence
    she so hot, when she pass by i be sweatin

    she's fyne, she's openminded, she's intellectual
    we've touched all levels except sexual
    normally i dont got the time, but for her im flexible
    just as long as her questions and favors are sensable

    she says she wants it, but she's holding back
    its less attractive when she starts pulling that
    she should know by now my mouth isnt flowing rap
    i see the god in her and i wanna get to know more of that

    she must know what she's doing...
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loooove this part:

    but did i even mention
    that this girl is god's top of the line invention?
    she's so fly, she got the bird's attention
    she got me on lockdown, like i got the life sentence
    she so hot, when she pass by i be sweatin




    :hot: :tongue:


    This is dope, as usual. ;)
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks my partner in crime, my homie, not lover, friend....lol
     
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    lol...tricks are for kids silly rabbit...lol
    dude...i've been thru dis game before...
    but what is da catch without da chase?
    tight son
    peace
    khasm
     
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    poeticaly is a GIRL!:lol: Its ok Khas......she writes from different prespectives . I got hooked on this when she said....."she's so fly she got the bird's attention"...that was soo classic!:) Tyte as always p:)
     
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    oh...**** :blush:
    so sorry :blush:
    stupid me...
    shant happen again madaam...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    "she's so fly, she got the bird's attention"
    That is my favorite part too. I love this poem. I sometimes don't like poems that rhyme a lot cause some people try to force rhymes, but your'es just flowed. Go head wit your bad self.
     
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    this was yummy, hecky yah, she knows.:D :cool:
     
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    ohhhhhhhhhhh shizznittle to tha dizzittle!!!!!
    this was good.....real good...and to be written by a female.....girl,
    i honestly think YOU know whut you doing.....!!!Feel me...
    yo dont forget to take me up on that ma.....


    dayum this was good.....you def got skillz .......one love
     
  10. POETIC BABI

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    I enjoyed that piece :) Can I ask, has she given in yet??:love:
     
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