Quiet Poetry Lounge : She Knows My Pains

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Feather, Apr 3, 2012.

  1. Feather

    Feather Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stinging
    sore
    scarlet eyes
    white tear streaked cheeks
    i wear in despair
    near unbearable
    about to break
    without a fix
    in regression only to wish i did
    scattered over the floor
    i kneel stiffly
    devastated
    to pick up the pieces
    betrayal has claimed its host
    and my faith still remains
    felt by the earth; the bass of my heart beats
    to the rhythm of my fear to move on

    and she lets me know i will be ok
    and she will remain as i travel
    an affirmation of my stregth to succeed
    despite the storm
    i will be fruitful
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed sis .......love da flow
     
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    Exquisite, Sister Poet Feather! I felt every word. Thanks for sharing.

    (smile)
     
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    Feather,
    your poem is blessed with weight ~
     
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    ^^^ i agree with 1poetsought. I see myself in this..
     
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    thank you very much :)
     
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    That's real deep I feel every word
     
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