Black Poetry : she is*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    off the dome*

    light descending
    r e f l e c t i n g
    spectrum of residual love--
    emotional rainbows of joy--

    sensory epiphany--
    touch taste smell
    sight...
    she--

    cold clouds leaving forehead kisses--
    similar to the touch of her lip gloss--
    lip glass, if i may--
    smooth,
    as opposed to the day

    mental movies of her--
    bringing about daydreams spawned from--
    passion
    love
    respect
    ...
    rendering
    wordsthatrambletogethertomake--
    MEweakwithhalfcoherentsentences--
    'stumbling over affetcion'

    'sending me'

    she is*
     
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    i'm lovin this!
    and your lipglass remark made
    me chuckle... (i love MAC)
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad u liked the read--

    been to poetic flowz lately?

    sean
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    no i haven't.
    you?
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i haven't been there

    going on about two years now...I bet A LOT has changed....

    sean
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