Black Poetry : She Is

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Legendof_1_Spirit, Mar 26, 2006.

  1. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She was
    the dream hidden behind my eyes
    when all other dreams blended into nightmares
    and filled my vision with vacant stares
    and my lips uttered silent prayers
    and my heart wished upon stars
    burning beyond the touch of my fingertips
    within Alaskan night skies

    Outside my window

    She is
    the northern lights shimmering in the distance.





    Legendof_1_Spirit
    c BCB 2006
     
  2. nevar

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    loving the flo poet keep up the good work poet.:luvv:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one beautiful star glazin upon ya !
    tyte poetic scribing
     
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    SHE IS, and has always been, the last frontier.

    Can U Dig it, LEGEND?
     
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    LEGENDOF_1_SPIRIT:

    Nothing wrong with a little astro-lovin:). Spectacular!
     
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    Your writing never fails to whisk us to another plane. Beautiful.
     
  7. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    <floats in>

    Thanks for reading and responding to my little poem. It's been a while since I was here but it's always good to return and share in the joy of poetry with everyone here. I am truely grateful for your responses, and shall try to live up to your praise.

    Thanks again.

    <floats out>
     
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    Great flow
    Wonderful perception
    You are very talented
    The vision I see
    Much love poet
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I likes....
    This is so pretty.
     
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    I want to be outside your window :flowers: :flowers:
    luving this one nice work Flo on...


    Smooches!!!!