Black Poetry : SHE IS....

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  1. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For reasons unbeknownst to me, Yawl kind folks here at Destee made me Poet of the week...Even tho I'm not a poet..I appreciate the recognition...Now I'm under pressure to put pieces up but I dont have anything new..So I will jes repost a piece I did in response to a piece written by MBA called "He Is"..*

    SHE IS...

    She is...
    the reason I woke up this morning
    with a smile on my face
    Her vibe is my grace
    It could never be replaced

    She is...
    the breath that I take
    inhaling her deeply in my essence
    for even when she's not in my presence
    I hold her captive in my flesh

    She is...
    this phenomenal entity
    taking this bull of a world by its horn
    while style & class is shown
    anything less than the best would never be condone

    She is...
    the pulse within my veins
    the guiding light when I can't see
    the voice of reason when I can't speak
    the feeling which makes me complete

    She is...
    my Blak Angel
    that protects me with her wings
    Serenades me when she sings
    all the good things that living life brings

    She
    is
    LOVE

    She is..
    ...LOVE

    She is LOVE
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just as beautiful as the first time, like a breath of fresh air....However, I'm thinking Drizzle, that you have more of this up your sleeve...come on, what do ya say POET?
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QQ @ u, Watz...Didnt I tell ya that I aint got no mo'?...lol...Seriously, I havent wrote anything in a minute...My pen ran out of ink..permanently...So U jes gonna haveta get ya highs offa my old pieces....Oh yea..before I 4get, thanx for the luv, Watz...

    Peace,
    Drizz

    PS...Now leave me alone....lol
     
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    an you say you don't know why you were chosen to be the poet of the week. drizzle drizzle we all have talent or we wouldnt be here. stop beating yourself up. i think you are a wonderful, excellente, star of a person. i would love to flow with you. i'll flow with anyone if they'll let me. so stop getting up every morning drinking that hatarade and drink some love baby. cause i love you Drizzle from your girl Nevar.
     
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    I like the part where you said , "She is...
    the breath that I take
    inhaling her deeply in my essence
    for even when she's not in my presence
    I hold her captive in my flesh

    loving the way you own this, u definately deserve poet of the week.. u are a beautiful poet and blessed.... enjoy your week... and keep shining.. D.S.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...So much love...Thanx Nevar...I surely appreciate it..
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm...I glad you felt this piece...Thanx 4 showing a brother some luv.

    Peace,
    Drizz
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    he is.................

    A POET

    you say you're not a poet
    you're kidding right

    because what you wrote here

    looks like poetry to me man

    peace
     
  9. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I will neva call myself a poet becuz I dont take this half as serious as the rest of these REAL POETS here @ Destee...But I appreciate the kind words and encouragements...Thanx Alot...

    Peace,
    Drizz
     
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    Sweetie, u are a poet.
    This is pretty.
    Don't tell anyone that u were talking
    about me(WINK,WINK).
    Very nice.