Quiet Poetry Lounge : SHE IS.........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naija-man, Feb 24, 2004.

  1. naija-man

    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She can be sweet,
    she can be painful
    she has made me cry
    she has made me laugh
    she made others live
    she has made others die

    She is short, and precious
    she can be easy for some and hard for others

    When she is taken away from someone, you realise that every moment is valuable with her.
    That's why you should use her constructively,
    take care of her

    make something of her
    live her,

    As she was created for you for no price
    you can also create her for no price
    Sometimes on purpose, sometimes by accident

    Her name is short.
    The name rolls of yor tongue and through the teeth and bottom lip

    LIFE......LIFE........................LIFE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed short of life
    can be what u make it to be
    feel free flow on
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's so wise of you to know that life is...a "she" :grin: there's nothing greater than..."LIFE"...well lived. this scribe is wonderful. :)
     
  4. ki-ki2004

    ki-ki2004 Active Member MEMBER

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    WiSdOm

    I loved the wisdom used in your lines...keep doing ya thang and keep it real.
    Life is indeed what we all make of it.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life just zooms by when you're enjoying it, but can creep like a turtle when things are awful. I liked the way you posed this.