Black Poetry : She is The woman.........

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHE IS THE WOMAN OF MY DREAMS:

    :Zzz:

    She allows me to love :luvv:
    She lets herself be loved :love:
    She lets me open up :insane:
    She allows me to be loved :love:
    She allows me to trust :coffee:
    She allows me to trust in her :coffee:
    She allows me to feel secure about her actions :wink:
    She allows me to know she has my back :uzi:
    She allows me to dream :pc:
    Dream of our times together :Zzz:
    She allows me to hold her :couple:
    She is so soft and so snuggly :lips:
    She allows me to be held :couple:
    And not feel less than
    She allows me to be me
    I love that about her :luvv:

    She allows me to understand her
    She allows herself to be understood :fyi:
    She allows herself to be there for me :number1:
    She allows me to give to her unconditionally :luvu:
    She allows me to be selfish
    Which is not that often… :cool:
    But nonetheless she allows it , if needed.

    She gives back unconditionally as well
    She allows me to vent :censored:
    She allows me to be heard
    She allows me to cry without feeling less than a man :cry:
    She allows comfort to me
    She allows me to let my guard down :bully:
    She allows me to be me :slobber:

    If You Find Her, Let Me Know, Send Her My Way..
    Or IS She Just A Dream Family?
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Could be a dream Python, of this I'm not sure, but I think that someone close to what you want is out there, won't be perfection, no one is, but somewhere out there none the less. Perhaps you may have already met her but haven't realized all her qualities yet? I think we all have been down this road a time or two at least, wondering. I feel ya, and I liked the direct way you brought this.
     
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    Hey...

    I think you wrote this for me! Naw just playing. Nice piece, i really enjoyed it. Remember, sometimes dreams do come true... keep progressing on brotha.
     
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    Oh boy did we enjoy this...the ending made me laugh though because I thought you were writing this of your wife. James really love it. Every now and then I will read some of the poems written by others out loud to him. He doesn't like to write poetry but he enjoys it being read to him if it's good. He said that the poem you wrote is a strong reflection of who I am to him as a woman. :nuts: Gosh...he says the sweetest things. He could relate to everything in your poem...except the ending. :D It is why he has been with me (25 years +) so long.

    Keep up the good work my brotha...you good some serious skills with your pen.


    Joyce
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname...Yes my sister she will come whe and only when it is her time and mine.



    tashatoya... yes without dreams reality wouldent be real...feel me?




    Joyce......... :kiss1: My sister I am pleased u 2 were able to feel this joint and see what you have in eachother, thats always special. :hearts2:
     
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    Well I make sure if i see her i send her ... but for you to take this and lay it like this...i think you got one in mind tight drop!! Angel
     
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    boo i'm right here y are you trippin
    tyte drop but you know i love every thing you write
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she allowed you to express this openly wit harmony & love
    tyte write she is the woman indeed .
     
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    Find a confident woman and you will find this kind of love...

    If I see her...I will most definitely direct her straight to you...

    For she would be equally as lucky in the exchange...

    Very nice python...

    You put this right in the corner pocket... :pool:

    Luvin it,
    Sage
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nobody in mind angel it's just a poem of collected thoughts n feelings...lol :confused:

    yes rich my dreams allow me 2 scribe anything...*wink* :nuts:

    Sage.....send her if u find her..lol my 2005 model..*wink* :D
     
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