Black Poetry : She is taking more than she shares

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She is taking more than she shares

    I knew this going in, so with that I’m still.

    If it balanced out where she finds, our one and the same

    I know I would just add more to the flames.

    I have levels I could touch

    I know exist, but to capture these levels

    It must be for a reflexive form of me

    Giving more than yourself

    Only intensifies what I know

    Reserved is her manner, unattached it seems at times

    I wonder just how much

    If like me, am I on her mind.

    Her distance to me seems close yet so far

    Were close at times but the distance seems more

    It’s frustrating, I crush that I knew going in

    Until we become lovers

    I’ll accept we are friends.

    I didn’t say goodbye

    That has finality to it

    It’s almost irrevocable once it is spoken

    Lost touch, last touch with her now

    Find her heart, her again I have tried

    Not putting in any effort

    Into that effort would be nice

    To her taking place by my side

    If it doesn’t fit I won’t force it

    I am conscience of the desire

    That would not be how to win her love

    Get her into my, with me in my life.

    If I saw her this moment

    Just the thought leaves me tense

    I hope I get it right

    First words like impressions, makes it solid or a miss.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great write here
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am confessing that she played me, that I allowed myself to be played. Just to be with her in this flow.
    Thank You Brother $$RICH$$

    I miss some of our MIA poets and poetesses. They were so inspiring.
     
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