Black Poetry : She is leaving (mom ) on that midnight train to ?

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember when she invited me to come...


    how i heard the longing in her voice on the other side of the line..


    Its nice to have a feeling of somebody wanting you near..


    I remember when she came to Holland to pick me up to come with her...

    and my heart cried .....

    the wonder ...

    "'what happend with her all that time..."'

    ''That shure was no love from a man ..i call it desperation..
    ..
    "'what did she do to herself""


    I knew i had to come there to be a light..

    When i arrived ...
    it was,nt so called alright...

    I remembered the spirrits in her treathend me one night....
    i had to be strong...

    I prayed ....vasted ...
    God please get her out of there...
    break the chance...

    in a way ...my prayers are answered....

    she is leaving from there...






    but leaving me behind...




    she says its getting expensive here ....
    she has to think about the future ..

    and i understand...








    but now i am here ....




    and she goes ...

    where ....


    i hope she,ll be alright......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your mother is blessed to have a daughter such as you. Now that she is on a new journey, you'll be with her in spirit. It's normal to be worried, I felt your words.
     
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    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you strength is light

    Auroraflower you have a purity of kindness and strength that is rare but golden to find. May your Mom find her peace and may God continue to guide you.
     
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    Stand strong sister! Your love is strong and will be with your mom even when you can't be. Stay positive!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    power in ya talk , power in your walk .....strong and live
    god bless sis
     
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