Black Poetry : She is Death

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She glides across darkened skies and bats her black eyes
    while peering down at dead meat even if you're alive
    She waits for you to take a dive in the shadows she hides
    Hell is low so, I say Hi she forces all goodbyes

    Her hair is long and kinky curling up and falling down
    She straightens it to impress a king right out of his crown
    She comes out of her gown and looks appeasing on the surface
    she creeps in your immune and makes your spirit nervous

    She's tall and leggy with black stockings and red bows
    She's seductive and ready to make you curl your toes
    Grim Reaper isn't a man that's her skull and her clothes
    and her sickle in the right hand to decapitate all foes

    Her enemies are few because her friends don't know
    how vicious she can be when you're on a roll
    take it slow says life but, speed up to get it right
    She's always hating, always mating, always waiting at red lights

    She loves only herself, her wealth , and things that are invincible
    and can prove their strength through action this is the principle
    "Don't mess up!" she says in a tone so whimsical
    She wants to break you completely no matter how bendable

    She's so used to being victor that she'll never give in
    So, live IN, live end, and keep on livin'
    She doesn't have any children so, she wants to adopt yours
    and make them part of her army, her vicious armed corps

    She supplies the drink for those who want to be drunk
    She supplies the chemicals for those who want to be crunk
    She smiles at your ectasy though she has none left
    Her very existence depends on your last breath

    She patterns our lifestyles in a non-prejudiced way
    She admires all fun-goers and allows them to play
    She's been given a negative persona but, she's not that bad
    she's been depicted as a witch, a low-down *****, and a hag

    When she's quite the opposite clad in silk and other raiments
    her garb is always clean never dirty or blood-tainted
    You see hell is replaced by a female's scorn
    When she's upset there's no peace, no sex, no child born

    She'll cook, clean, and massage even do a little dance
    make a little love even give you another chance
    but, when a woman's fed up... ya betta call ya mama
    because she brings the pain and all the drama

    She is the daughter of the devil and the mother of an angel
    She attacks liars and cursed ones from each and every angle
    her banner is star-spangled her stripes are bright and bold
    she holds scales in one hand and in the other your soul

    Keep her happy young man and she'll make you old and gray
    She knows you, learn her and she just might stay
    She just might play games with your mind gone astray
    Will she leave you to the buzzards? as for that, I can't say
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    what they say

    life's a beach then you die

    it can be a grind or a pleasure ride

    but whatever it is it's life

    on earth

    peace


    um

    by the way very strong work here poet

    much strength and such perception

    peace.
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    hell hath no fury like a woman scorned!!

    I know when I'm FURIOUS I'll destroy anything in my path!!!

    this right here is on point!

    I just read this again.... and mayne!!!

    this could be death, justice, a broken hearted woman..........

    very talented there!!! real talk!!
     
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    This hit major cords here ......great scribe poet
     
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    A couple of thoughts went through my mind as I read this. One was how red hot anger can be, and how vividly you described that ire. The other was that hell doesn't look like hell on the outside, that's sometimes why we are so ready to enter. Great scribe poet, welcome back.
     
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    Hi Shaiyn
    The intro into your poem reminded me of a mystery
    your flow felt so eerie, as I read on. I understood why
    The emotion in your flows is awesome, because it blaze
    with the sentiment of cautions. As I the reader read on.
    Very cool write my brother. Pulsating


    Peace~N~Love
     
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    YIKES!!!!!
    I dnt think that that woman is nica at all.....
    Grim Reeper?
    *faint*

    You made it flow Bro
    ^s
     
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    Sha'iyn, Sha'iyn, Sha'iyn......
    I hate to say it but....this is some real talk right here.
    You laid this one out for sure.
    As always I'm never disappointed when I read you.
    Hella scribe!!!!

    Much Luv to you!!!!
     
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