Black Poetry : She Howls at The Moon (Ugly Beauty)

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Upon her back she lies
    whispering “come on big Daddy…”
    while inside she hates the man
    the plan
    the game played
    and she seeks the moon

    As he mounts her
    with that deplorable smell
    that smell
    the stench of body unclean
    and soul unclean
    and solicited sex –
    voluntary rape fiend
    she seeks the moon in nasty

    but she seeks the moon in necessity
    as a lover
    for she must sell to eat
    to feed her little three
    back home in a one-room
    high-rise hell hole, called home
    with no power to see
    no water to wash free
    the stench of this life
    so she seeks the moon as a lover
    to take her away
    from this foul f^%K fool
    this foul “rent by the hour” f^%K room
    the foul existence of a f^%Ked-up life

    so she escapes to the moon
    to a fairy tale love
    of a strong black family
    a strong black man
    with a strong black love
    and strong generational ties
    and for 3 minutes she
    lives and flies to the moon
    as a queen
    with a king
    in a royal palace…

    until his howl and piercing excrement
    brings her crashing back to the ground

    until next, she howls at the moon
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was deep brotha, i like it....
    :heart:
    -story
     
  3. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read story!
    glad you could feel me...

    klaB
     
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    Wow....Your words were so piercing. I guess, lol, actually I know when a soul gets too weary to deal with reality, you have to momentarily put it on a higher plane.
     
  5. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    escape is coping. so many of us must run at time because our reality is just too much to bare. thanks for the read..
    k

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when reality strike so many hide .....this was tyte flowing
    u really created a picture here
     
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    very well written Klabbaron...
    I have been taken in to the scribe of your poetry
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    wow...this was so gripping
    it's amazing how even those
    of society to which have no
    voice...escape as well all
    have that place...in the moon
    the imagery in this was
    brilliant...

    I loved the crashing ending...

    Excellent read!
     
  9. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm just getting back to the forum....

    angelicsage... you seem to be walking with me. i appreciate your company and comments. much love and thanks....

     
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