Black Poetry : She has my Intuition Working

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Apr 19, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She has my Intuition working over time

    Intuitive knowledge I could have never found
    Until the Kiss
    From her lips, as the words hit the page
    I taste the sweet essence
    Of every word written

    That she says as she speaks
    I am getting off track.
    I need to focus back’

    It is hard I know
    Very Hard
    When she moves me​
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    you meant your intuition right? lol

    i couldn't help myself there

    listen i know the feeling

    BLACK QUEENS ARE BEAUTIFUL!

    especially the ones who can make you feel like this

    :terrific:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected]'ja. There must be just something about her, hard to concentrate when someone moves you in that way. Well expressed brother poet.
     
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    Oooh!

    Hodee, what you've described here is so universal, to me. How many of us have balanced what we think or feel against what is really REAL!

    I think this piece could have just as easily been titled "Curiosity."

    That's what I got from it.

    GREAT THOUGHT-PROVOKING PIECE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man you don't have to tell me , i can relate been there myself beautiful black sistah
    move me all the time ...whewwww this piece was awesome Hodee
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dont know why I didnt reply to this one because I know I read it :thinking: smh
    who knows lol
    I enjoyed this piece (and I enjoyed hearin you sing in chat lol)
    This was a short fun inqusitive piece that left us wondering what happens next :)
    Write on brother hodee! :)
     
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