Black Poetry : She doesn't know my name!!!!!

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunny day outside
    Walking a busy ATL street with my head held high
    When a woman passing by
    and catches my eye
    Her poise, her walk, everything I can't deny
    Catches my eye
    And I know I know her and it makes me want to cry
    When I see her walking by
    She looks me in the eye
    And smiles a smile that makes me want to die
    The face of an angel with wings flying high
    But she doesn't know my name
    She doesn't know that I'm the one to blame
    For causing her family pain
    I'm the one that pulled her husband in with my too fly game
    The other woman that her husband bangs
    And it's driving me insane
    To looks at her walk so peacefully and not even know my name
    You see, because I was once that girl that was naive to the game
    Thought my man
    Was a saint and that I was his only woman
    The girl that was too foolish to check my man's draws for semen
    And to smell the perfume of other women
    To suspect something when he washes his shirt with stains around the collar
    To suspect something when he lower his voice so it's only heard by the other caller
    I was once that woman

    As she passes me I could have sworn that she knew me
    She looked me dead in the eye and for a moment those seconds felt like eternity
    Her smile left her face and she just looks at me
    Her headed turns as she looks back at me
    My eyes don't blink instead they reminise about the last time her husband was with me
    The way he held my hips and dove into me
    Slowly
    And ever so gently
    He held me
    And sexed me
    So lightly
    That it was heavenly
    I wondered if he made her feel as good as me
    Did she know how I felt when he was with me
    Did I hold the same glow that she held because moments ago he was with me
    Did she know me
    Because just like her I held that glow ever so peacefully
    But she doesn't know my name

    Every steps goes by slowly
    As I think of his seed inside me
    The promises that he made me
    Telling me that I was his new wife to be
    And that SHE
    She was just a past fantasy
    As she passes I feel as if she knows me
    It freaks me
    That she could know ABOUT me
    And not even know me
    Not even know my name
    She stops and just looks
    I still walk, you should have seen the long strides I took
    It was just like a novel of book
    The drama that was about to unfold.........was my very own book.


    To be continued........the confrontation
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Confronting yourself with the truth is a great exit strategy, please continue...


    :tennis:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling self and speaking to self allowing to look deep in to recover da answers
    tyte drop
     
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    mahoganyqueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was too nice. It flipped into something I didn't see coming. I love how you did that. Nice flow.
     
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    tyte drama laced piece...
    one love
    khasm
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight
    flow head on...awaiting the next part
    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. triniti424

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    o my goodness QQ look at you baby gurl alright now whew
    *awaiting the confrontation*
     
  8. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya'll so much. I'm so glad that ya'll liked it.
     
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