Black Poetry : She died for me....

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ..the honey from her kiss
    closed several wounds
    dealt me by systematic whips
    of racial and judicial bigotry
    l mounted... and they witnessed triumph
    of blak love and conscious of old...

    she assured me that l
    was dark and beautiful, like Jesus
    and to my belief added her warm affection...
    for once l understood ressurrection
    in earth
    heaven and beyond...

    l cried to her... apologetic
    for things done and undone
    seen and unseen
    her pressence , having grace, became the line between
    erasing my fears
    wiping my tears that only my queen would ever see shed...

    she came, as the wind,
    not knowing that her light stroke
    was my fiercest wind
    that shifted everything around me
    to my completeness and desire..
    her calm was my fire...
    her death was my wire of life...

    She died for me





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  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful!

    Please...let me be first to honor you for this... :bowdown:
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and please let me be the second...and even if I was the last
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    love hath known no greater sacrifice than to lay ones life aside for another...
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok...now I'll reply...

    you have such a way of expressing
    the depth of love, commitment and
    the infinite levels upon which love
    can reside within an inseparable union...

    read the first version and then this one...
    only you could capture the beauty of
    spirituality in love...

    a classic...
     
  5. enigma

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    Being in love with Love

    You are wearing me out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    keep writin', keep feelin', keep lovin',
    Enigma
     
  6. Bluewater

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    ah wow
    i am so at peace with this flow
    wonderful wonderful
    oh so nice indeed
    Peace
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im in complete awe....this is beautiful
     
  8. Hiclass_female

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    Awesome!!!! keep up the fabolous work.
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage,
    honor coming from you like dat...
    *no pass out smilie*
    and then...
    triniti424 :jawdrop: ... thanx for your presence
    alone, and then the adage
    enigma,
    you already have my poetic eyes on you...
    thanx for the love
    Bluewater,
    the name alone is serenity
    and the love you show is just that
    thanx
    SwtT,
    thanx.. looking out for your flowz...
    HiClass_female,
    Hi Class huh?? l believe you all day
    thanx...

    ....to die is gain
     
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