Black Poetry : She Dances With Me.....(my angel love)

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dedicated to my babygirl....If u got kidz,peep if u want....holla back tho


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    I look into her eyes,
    and everything i see
    is dreams that i have had,
    i dream for you and me...
    we'll make it thru these times,
    grab my hands and swing
    let tha joy live in you,~tha~joy~is~in~me~ too
    SHE DANCES WITH ME...........repeat....


    yo,
    i been through alotta heart ache and pain
    but my babygirl,well,she makes it all go away........
    i look into her eyes and think of whut my life coulda been
    prolly woulda ended up in tha pen servin' 8 to 10...(years).......
    my life as i knew it,took a new turn cause now im happy
    my angel love spoke her first word and it was 'daddy'......
    her eyes chinky like mine,her smile all innocent
    reminesent of her mother.....,but dead that,f&*k her......
    when Christmas hits i get all into it,and start gettin' gifts
    just so i could see that smile once again... ,it just mends...
    my heart cause without her i'll be roamin tha streets
    lonely with heat,hopin i beat tha odds goin against me,swollen my feet.....
    never that ,i remember back ,sayin 'i hate kids'
    but this matrix type a life sucked me in quick,breakin my ribs......
    so to God i went hopin that he'll take my sins
    cause i gotta do right and start makin these ends........
    alotta men frontin' now,actin' out tha wrong roles,these fake friends
    cant roll,Lurk break em in ,give em Knowledge,Unfold scrolls..................
    about love and life and how u gotta make it right
    whether ur stuck on tha side of tha road,or on tha runway,takin flight.....
    it all comes to a point one day,happiness should be reached
    cause my seed was tha happiness that happened to me,can u see...??!!!...
    that

    I look into her eyes,
    and everything i see
    is dreams that i have had,
    i dream for you and me...
    we'll make it thru these times,
    grab my hands and swing
    let tha joy live in you,tha~joy~is~in~me~ too
    SHE DANCES WITH ME...........repeat....

    So the other day were dancin' to some hip hop beat
    slow tempo flow,im laughin at her ,shes laughin at me......
    i think we was bumpin that track by Alicia Keyz
    i know all my secrets safe within her and her secrets are safe with me..
    some dayz i get her dressed up all pretty and go
    out to tha park ,show her tha ropes,show her life in its glow....
    show her what ta do right,she alwayz replies 'NOOO'
    But thats my angel for ya,a rebel but my rebel also knows.......
    that if she disrespects daddy she dont get no surprise from tha sto'(re)
    parenthood, cant be all to good,but ya know,this is how it goes.....haha
    we have that certain bond,and aint no *** could replace that
    my daughters always first,and shawty has to accept and take that.....
    for my babygirl i deaded 3 women over tha same facts
    that i would never put her second,i was outta date(s) like an 8 track.......
    but thats how it be ,forget these fools, and they corny pounds
    all i need is my seed,she tha only one that calms me down...
    from dayz of pure stress,and trials and trivs i face
    nightmares of Death,nevertheless or while we in this place.....
    i feel pressured to fly away and drop like Aaliyah......
    but the 'HeaveN.s' ~reversed~ my life thats why i named my precious daughter~'Neveah.'..........(pronounced Nev-e-ah..'heaven' backwards..)

    I look into her eyes,
    and everything i see
    is dreams that i have had,
    i dream for you and me...
    we'll make it thru these times,
    grab my hands and swing
    let tha joy live in you,~tha~joy~is~in~me~ too
    MY SEED DANCES WITH ME...........repeat....


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    ^^^^^^^^
    thats a picture of us.......

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  2. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's very profound, your love for your daughter... your "baby girl" (i have one of those too) is so full it's spilling of the page
    Nice job!
    B.E.Z
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    110% beautiful and the sweet love of thy baby girl
    i feel ya i have one little sweet angel myself flow on
    lovin it.................................................................
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Rich and Arthur...it means alott!
     
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    i thought you guyz would like this one.....guess not
     
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    awesome i am loving this vibe poet of the week :hearts4:
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lurk i really liked this poem too, this was a tyte drop my brother!
     
  8. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    would u like to hear this song yall??
     
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    Big ups got to love it. and hell ya I wanna here the song
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    angel love ...baby gurl
     
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