Black Poetry : she danced ...danced...and danced

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They took her to this childs party..
    t,was by this little classfriend called marty..
    All the children had their presents.....
    but all she had was her presensce....
    They sang,
    there was candy,
    childrens games...even a big suprise!!
    but the only thing she did was dancing..
    this flowerchild..
    She danced.....danced.... danced
    and danced...
    no one caught her smile..
    People started talking ""she must have been
    a crack kid or a child with les attention""
    but she didnt listen to the rumours...
    she just kept on dancing

    At the end of the party Marty came up to
    her and said ; My mom things you are a
    ""weird "child and you,ve been acting like
    a ""fool""
    she kept a one minute silence and said:
    did,nt you noticed...

    i danced for

    you...



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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I mean that was deep, libertylaida. Isn't it a shame that children have to deal with life's daily heartaches such as the one you captured in scribe? Reminds me that we need to appreciate one another not for what we want from one another but for what each is able to give in whatever form. Nice peace.
     
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    i really love how u captured this display of beauty
    as children seek within the way they poses.....
    she danced all day for him .....wow! and welcome to
    the house of destee's place ya upon family & friendz
    enjoy ya self and continue sharing a piece of ya pen .
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nia said it best... Bravo!

    Reas
     
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    I love the message you convey through your words....

    you have shown the two very opposite characteristics of a child ....beauty in their innocence and cruelty in their innocence..


    K
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmm let me see if it works

    thank you guys for responding,you also gave me some converdance to contineu....
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its a old one let me post this again......because..this one had adeeper meaning ....
     
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    ...........
     
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    well, I was feelin it.....I was like what at the end....after thinking about the true meaning came immediately.......nice vibe
     
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