Black Poetry : She came from the city of Sheeba

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  1. Black Madness

    Black Madness New Member MEMBER

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    Your air covers my earth
    Combined as one
    a dream of two
    Sends the scent of Sandalwood rippling through
    Georgous as the Gorges of Greece
    tranqil as the serenity of inner peace
    I fantasize of jogging on her minds treadmill
    CAPTIVATED - by
    lustrous melanin skin
    softer than milk fibers mixed with egyptian cotton
    I mounted my stallion
    starting my journey down from bosoms twin peaks
    gently galloping through her her caves of within
    peeling back the skin
    I tasted her nectar
    and was poisoned with love

    I awoke on my knee's dreaming of you in broad daylight
    facing east towards a cresent moon
    your energy
    omnipresent
    solar lighting my nights
    permeating my temple
    hijacking my vessel
    cloaked in antiquity
    her soul is a mid-day
    matinee of the past
    COMMERCIAL FREE

    DIVINELY ENRAPTURING

    Dove's cry, purple rain
    at her comeliness
    she was soil unfertalized
    I planted my minds seeds
    deep inside
    and she gave birth to
    a radical change
    SOCIAL EVOLUTION

    Sashaying away into day of light
    twice in the night we got right
    and in the morning I was;
    CALM
    and she was;
    FOREVER GONE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to da house u found
    welcome to the community of love & peaceful respect

    this was awesomely poeticly done , i look to read more of you soon !
     
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    Thanks Rich.. I look foward to posting more work..
     
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    Awesome .........From one poet to another.
     
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    Welcome to the boards fam, and PLEASE: stick around and drop some more of this!

    A big thumbs up for the first poem on Destee to use the word 'sashaying' (LOOOL) :D

    One (black) love from your brother,

    - Ikoro
     
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    Thank you Ikoro, I'll definitely be sticking around.
     
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