Quiet Poetry Lounge : SHE CAME 2 ME WHILE I SLEEP...

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    :time:
    time shine while i sleep
    her soul enter mines deep
    I so dreameth of her face
    inside my slumber of secret place
    I saw her beautiful slanted eyez
    chocolate cherry smile arise

    She walked inside my sleep
    saftly my soul to keep
    spoken softly on rapid tone
    then a little sexy moan
    i had no clue to who she was
    or was it my gift from above
    but i know it was love

    I called out as she fade
    looking back upon da dayz
    now i wonder was it you??
    that has enter my slumber of truth
    that has my spirit into you
    and my mind lost in da blue '
    knowing my heart really need you
    yet i'm lost without a clue '

    She came to me while i sleep
    got my body & knees so weak
    pose an essence great and meek
    and a lingering aroma so sweet
    was it you , tell me now
    while my heart is on this cloud
    da image of you was an angel
    to my heart you not a stranger

    Then i can let it go
    tell you what my love bestowed
    only for the Queen of my dreamz
    the face my sleepin mind has seen '
    she came to me while i sleep...:boring:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something as sweet as this, doesn't seem real and yet, in your mind you may not know why this is, but in your heart you know who it is. Absolutely beautiful...
     
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    this is a very beautiful poem, Rich...

    never know what to expect otta ya, and I like that...

    yo... keep droppin em!!!

    like the flexibility in ya style much.......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you watz.......most humble sister.

    Thank you Miss Lady that's the beauty of it all to change up and bring it on different levels...much love sis

    That could be true , but whomever it was had me in deep and feeling the grace of there touch
    beyond touching I humble thank you dearly sistah Soulosophy
     
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    Hi RICH
    You had a good night sleep.
    I felt how relax you were in your poem
    This is an enjoyable flow.
    It is wonderful how when sleep comes peacefully.
    A beautiful dream appears.
    Nice flow my brother.


    Peace~N~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sister Blue it was a sleep that i enjoyed and found Dark n' lovely
     
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    Sultry and Flowing Brother $$RICH$$
    SOmetimes those dreams don't want to let us wake up huh?
    Mixed Realities as well
    ^s
     
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    yeah ! we can get lost in the mist of them when they come so sweet and new
     
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    $$RICH$$:
    The beauty and passion that continously flowz
    from your pen never ceases to amaze me.
    Lovely write


    Much Luv
     
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    Thank you sister dearest , what i've seen was so beautiful in spirit and mold
     
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