Quiet Poetry Lounge : she calls... but how do i save her

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by herlove, Sep 16, 2002.

  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 6, 2002
    Messages:
    263
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +2
    how do i save her ????

    she cries out in the darkness of her innocence
    but how do i save her ???
    the portion of my love ...
    that come from me but .... is not of me
    a beautiful reflection that only a mother can see

    she cries out in the darkness but how do i save
    when it is me she no longer seek for comfort
    how do i save her ????
    do i stand in the shadows ....as this mean
    world began to feast upon her beauty
    how do i .............


    just venting and madd as ....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    no doubt

    one can't be saved from the hush of ya tongue
    so forth speaketh openly unto her so she may hear....:eek:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    speak up a classical call
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    This touched the mom in me, and I'm sure you eventually spoke your peace. Hopefully, she listened.
     
Loading...