Black Poetry : she B like LOVING me

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know I know that she
    loves me cause
    when I wake it's like she B
    diggin the crust from the
    corners of my mouths
    and gently
    kisses me on my lips that encase a funky ***
    breath from sleeping hard

    she must've knew I was dreamin' 'bout her

    and **** when I'm on the toilet
    between....
    you know between strains and sounds of
    relief and water splashing she B like

    "I Love You"

    she made going to the bathroom a new holiday
    for me that I relive everyday so
    I can replay
    her voice say

    "I Love You"

    well ****, baby I love you too...
    that's what i told her

    and she must love me cause she B
    like holdiing me when I'm done
    ballin'
    sweaty and skunky and salt
    dried up on the sides of my face
    she be like putting me in a royal place
    MEN tally when she
    does that ****

    I Love her for that
    it must be love

    cause she B like rubbing my feet after a long day
    of work inside of shoes without ventilation...

    ...ya'll know now...and i B like ****'you don't really have
    to do that cause...

    but dang that feels good...
    but see i be rubbing her feet to
    and sucking her toes and licking
    between them cause ****

    I LOVE HER TOO

    and **** she B just loving me
    so much that I wish I could hold all of ya'll
    so you
    could feel my vibe and we
    could like watch the sun rise together
    and recite poems and politic
    a bit

    cause **** she B like Loving me.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang! Thats love.
    I love this. It was a fun read.


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Can't B anything BUT love !

    Scribe on Blak scribe on :heart:
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coco and natasha,

    queens ya'll know I B like loving the comps...see I B

    loving the comps like riding the clouds when I am down
    like sitting on sunday and thanking God for another day like
    letting my toes spread in wet grass like...


    ya'll get he point :)

    blak
     
  5. dnommo

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    twin...there you go droppin heat...now i know you been holding down the room but **dang** must you be so tight?

    excellent bro'
     
  6. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, some serious toe jam love eh? That'll get to a brutha. I enjoyed.

    JAH Lives!
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sgp.


    ...yesssss indeed!! ya'll B lovin' each otha sumthin'
    fierce!! :lol: & it's all good... 'cause i can relate!!

    you know how i love that thang you do wit words!

    itsallLove, chile!! (& dat B on the real!!) :)

    elayne.
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm hummm

    she B lovin you for real cause it gotta B love for her to come inbetweenstrainsandwatersplashes







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