Black Poetry : she ain't ready

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she's not ready for a man like me-
    one who will open her door even if my ride we raggedy....

    she's not ready for a man like me-
    one who will put her chair out even if we went to McD's....

    she's not ready for a man like me-
    one who will re-heat the left over spaghetti....

    she's not ready for a man like me-
    one who could talk to other women and all i mention is she....

    she ain't ready

    girl you ain't ready for me!!!
     
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    J'hiah... That was a beautiful poem my brotha.. I liked it alot!!!
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l ain't broke! :D
     
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    with words like that !

    shoot I'm ready ....!!!!!!:D
    micky D's got some good *** fries !!!
     
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    There are a lot of sistah's who are ready ... and who've also been waiting for a brotha like this!!

    Great short piece!!

    N2
     
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    good truthful poem....
     
  7. shaz

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    Sounds like the broke *** hood Rat type that needs to be played yet once again.
    And when she is old she will despise and berate the name of all men, but the truth be told she always found exactly what she was looking for-someone who shared her values.
     
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    she just might be... -7:spinstar:
     
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    she may not be ready for the love of a gentle man...but someone out there is waiting for good love like this to come along...sweet, simple, strong love...

    K
     
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    tankhead.


    she ain't ready, huh? well... all imma say is
    i'ont know many women whose apts are big
    enough for your head to fit thru the door...
    but when you find one... she is definite-ly
    gonna have to brang it to git wit the Don. :D

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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